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Sweet Lady I'm Contemplating
10 reviews"The rest of the time I worry about you," I lightly smiled and watched as she shook her head. "And if you have moved on yet,"
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I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) duckapple 2006-12-18
I love you. I love you. I love you. I love you. I would fill this whole thing up, but I'm lazy. Just promise not to kill anyone in this one? Please? Also, lets make a pot roast and some babies. I'll buy the wine if you bring the Patrick (we'll need mood music you see).I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-18
I found the ground, slowly standing, only to find a hammer in my skull, breaking down the walls. -> I love that imagery. You got me there.
The daggers in his eyes were sharp and poking into my skin -> Powerful imagery again. Love it.
Ha. The prayer thing was funny, Evie. You rock the cow stable!
Pst, just an aside note: When a chair hits the floor, the sound it makes is usually referred to as “plonk”. (Pete hitting the floor with a thud – that’s perfectly ok… Unless he becomes even thinner. Then it might sound like a “plonk” after all.)
The hate-worry ambiguity feeling Evie has for Pete. That’s beautiful, moomoo. :) I can relate to that so well. And I know somebody else who can as well.
I needed to rate this.
Wow. So not only do you manage funny you also manage serious and moving. Kinda scary if you ask me. Are you some kinda witch? Trying to hide beneath this whole cow business?
Well, I guess I’ll never know. But I know that this story must not only go onto my alerts but also my favs.
Big fat WOW.
P.S.: Could you please sign my copy of “The Moo Monthly”?I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-18
pete should've kicked that guys ass. i would've. well, if i was pete. if i tried with the no muscles i have now, it would not be very pretty. hehe. love it as usual, and i cant wait for an update!I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) rawrlittledino 2006-12-19
OH MY MOO.
You know how to ruin a good moment don't you?
Well tell Derrick to go stick his dick in a steel industrial fan.
And then do it again, just for good measure.
And then we want babbbbbyyyyy.I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) AshleyChaotic 2006-12-19
And if you can't bring one asshole in the story
you bring another.
I think we should just spawn, right now.
Gah some bullshit has been happening in my life, but Ashley is hurr and ready to write with Evie haha.I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) LovelyxMistake 2006-12-19
...And we'll have lots and lots of babies.
Hehe.
I love yoou.
You make my day. :]I Could Be Taking You There With Me
(#) nya-MEya 2006-12-23
Petey just want an excuse to malest her stomach.
woooo
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