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• The Mistake

  (#) FrostedGlass 2006-12-21

  It was as if her entire body just decided to not fit correctly into all of her clothes- suddenly she had mutated. -> I found this both amusing and literary. My favorite combo. :)
  
  I’ve had those awkward conversation moments with my best friend’s boyfriend. But I got rid of the problem. I don’t have any friends anymore. (Not a lie.) Or rather, candy bars usually don’t have boyfriends…
  
  Ha ha, messy (pretending) sleepy-head face.
  
  delivering their suitcases and receiving a ten dollar bill for his trouble. Ava considered the fact that she might want to think of a change in her profession. Being a bellboy was apparently where the money was. -> giggles I could see myself in that profession. Or at least with a new shiny 10 dollar bill. (I know, I know. Paper doesn’t shine.)
  
  "Just come in. You don't have to wait; I put your name on the list. Everything should be fine." -> melts at GwenMerlon’s Patrick Stump
  
  Ha, snorting Patrick. Still the Biscuit.
  
  A bandana skirt. Ha ha. I hope that’s not one of Patrick’s bandanas. glares at the slutty girl
  
  Patrick’s sideburns against her cheek… My heart. My poor old heart. This is too much… ;)
  
  By the way, those evil fan girls, I believe that was the hushed voice DoJ. Bunch of pathetic losers.
  
  "Don't be. I would fuck you in a second." He frowned. "Well, hopefully not in a second, surely I would last longer than that... you know what I mean." -> HA! HA! HA! This story is so gooooood…
  
  HA! HA! HA… ah, you are amusing me today, dudette. :)
  
  Rating point. Funny. End of.

• The Mistake

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-21

  starts chanting CLOSET CLOSET CLOSET CLOSET!!!
  
  Sorry, all the other stuff in the chapter kinda blurred out and all I can focus on was this....
  
  Be rated you sexy minx you.....

• The Mistake

  (#) whatkatydid 2006-12-21

  oh, also, you'll notice that Alex has successfully represented the Division Of Joy with her long, constructive and meaningful reviews.
  
  I am the lowest member, just demanding the good stuff.....you can always count on me to lower the tone.
  
  x

• The Mistake

  (#) riaryder 2006-12-22

  How have I never read this story before? Because I am the Queen of slow to pick up the goods on here, that's why!
  Anyway, Loving it, the whole thing. The closet stuff was HOT! and anything with Patrick being sexy is good for me. Also, the tension undertones with Matthew are intriguing. I suspect there's more to him than meets the eye.
  Great, exciting, original story. Have a point as apology for my slowness and for your greatness!

• The Mistake

  (#) moocow 2006-12-22

  "Pete," Patrick growled, "Find your own damn closet."
  
  that. made me laugh like no mother fucker knows

• The Mistake

  (#) Frenchie189 2006-12-22

  lmfao, oh my god. Your story is amazing. I love it, update soon.

• The Mistake

  (#) FallOutGrl 2006-12-22

  Hahaha Petey is so cute . :P Good work hunn! Keep it up!

• The Mistake

  (#) patrickdance4me 2006-12-23

  haha i laughed out loud at patrick telling pete to "find your own damn closet" that was hilarious! write more soon!

• The Mistake

  (#) danceislife 2006-12-24

  hahah sharing the closet...
  
  I literally laughed out loud. Was NOT expecting that. Keep it coming!

• The Mistake

  (#) xloveorsympathy 2006-12-26

  jeez, i feel funny. i just found this story and i feel funny/ sad because i just did. im slow. this is AMAZING!
  not even kidding.
  haha sharing the closet that made me laugh :P i love how you just put the right things in at the write time to make it all amazing like :)

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