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Chapter Eight: Hilton Worthy
17 reviewsAva goes with Matthew to the concert... hmm, what shall happen?
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The Mistake
(#) jessiearei 2006-12-28
hahaha!!
that was hilarious!
way to ruin the moment Pete!!
geez!!
haha update again soon!!
i love it so far!The Mistake
(#) LiveLoud 2007-01-29
I have been reading this story straight through. I don't know how I didn't come across it before, and I usually wait until the end to post a review, but this chapter was so amazing, I couldn't wait. The other person who said to have more chapters like this one was soooo right. It would not have been the same without the closet scene. More closet scenes!Author's response
I'll work on the closet scenes, even though I don't think they're my forte. ;)The Mistake
(#) ssketchator 2007-06-01
This was sexxxy. Like really hot.
The Pete bit was high-larious.
And I love Patrick being a little more dominant, especially because you don't write him as the kind of guy who can get all the girls and knows it. He's just a boy who likes a girl, which is great.
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