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in which Molly tried to make a major decision regarding her love life, and winds up regretting the after effects. in which Elyse reveals a confusing time in her life that involved funny clothes.
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Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) duckapple 2007-01-10
I'm on campus.
I should be figuring out what to do about that English class I need.
But no, I'm reading this.
And I love you for that.Author's response
yes! Bridget distracting people from getting their important stuff done. My life is complete. I miss being able to say "i'm on campus" don't graduate. it sucks.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) danceislife 2007-01-10
Molly drunk isn't too bad. I'm surprised. I was expecting her to be all over Danny, but I'm glad she wasn't.Author's response
being one of the only females I know that can become intoxicated and not automaticaly latch onto a male, I wanted to give Molly that same ability.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Subs 2007-01-10
Cool Chapter
Poor Danny, at least he had the decency to take her back home after she mentioned Patrick..Author's response
yea, Danny's a nice guy. kinda deserves better then the drama that surrounds these crazy people.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-10
Haha. I love it update soon please.Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) xloveorsympathy 2007-01-10
Seriously. Go home. I play soccer dude, I might look little but I could kick your ass."
haha loved it :P
Merci for updating.. saved my a couple mins of not doing homework :P
another amazingly written chapter :)
cant wait till next one :PAuthor's response
soccer players are hardcore. usually hot too. I was friends with them in college, dudes are "scrawny" looking but they pack a punch--hell look at the wentz.
tsk tsk. do your homework! lolWould You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) Tawney 2007-01-10
Arg....hand cramp...i think my fingers have seized up in a mouse position. I've been reading this for a good couple hours now and seriously how could i have missed it! It's frigging ACE!
You're so good with dialogue(i'm insanely jealous btw), i can really imagine all of your characters talking to each other.
I love how your angst is realistic aswel. Usually stories start out good and then the angst makes it too deep and depressing. I'm not a huge fan of angst (Perhaps you can tell!?) at the best of times but you write so realistically that i couldnt stop reading.
This is most definately going in my faves and will be getting many more of my points in the future. I'm just sorry that i didnt find your fic sooner! XXAuthor's response
thanks so much! I dunno how you missed it either i've been putting up like 2 chapters a day since the 28th. jk. :) Glad you're on board now. I try and keep things realistic, my biggest peeve in fanfic is how melodramatic and unrealistic things can get. You don't meet Pete and marry him 3 chapters later. shrugWould You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-11
Patrick is disturbingly short -> Ha ha. Sometimes I can’t believe how much a sole adverb can change the meaning. Or rather, add to the meaning.
If I had had a friend like Elyse maybe I would not think most girls suck today. Who knows?
Patrick is definitely the type to get pussy-whipped. nods Which is pretty much my type of guy.
Geeez, the only thing Beer is good for, is listening to it…
This chapter was very coolish! I especially liked how you described the bar thing because I am not familiar with line dancing at all and the athmosphere there. (First I wrote “hatmosphere”.)
Poor Molly-Mol.Author's response
coming from a fellow short person I feel I can totally use words like disturbingly. I'm 5'1" he should be happy he's at least taller then I am..i think.
I think I want Elyse to be my bff too.
I have to admit I wrote him pussy whipped after the AP article when he was all "book all our anniversirys cause I dont wannna be alone" and I laughed. and then I felt like a terrible human being.
line dancing is SO fun. crowded bar, lotsa noise tons of people. its kind of like a punk show without the piercings.
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