(#) danceislife 2007-01-18He didn't use her did he?! Ahh I will transport myself into your story only to knock him over the head with a lamp or something. Gah. In the beginning, I couldn't get over the feeling that he was using her, and your last sentence didn't help. This is pure torture..
Author's responseif he was using her they would have had sex. Patrick is just still not sure he should be with her--for a few reasons. I don't know if you've noticed but Molly isn't the most stable individual sometimes. And Patrick is pretty convinced the band will leave him living in his parents house making no money for the rest of his life and he knows how Molly's father thinks. So he's nervous about being with her.
- Bridget, you are the sneakiest author here. I wake up and there's 3 chapters posted. I just can't keep up. Anywho, I giving out a lot of "hot" ratings, but I think this chapter actually earned it. That is just like boys...they don't want you, then they do. And they say we're nuts. Go figure.
Author's responseI think I'm the sneakiest author 'cause I'm a total insomniac. That last chapter was posted at like 4:30am. and yes boys are crazy.
- That was a shitty review. Shame on me. I like how he didn't have sex with her. He sensed she was nervous and I'm sure he's not exactly comfortable with the idea. I think they should date a little first. I don't want my Molly sleeping around with that Patrick kid. He should at least take her out to dinner first.
Author's responseyea. I didn't want Patrick to be a total tool. I've done too much of that to him in this story so far. They have one teeny speed bump coming up and then they'll figure things out. for a little while at least. bwhahahaha. ;)
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-18“Gladice Mulberry“ -> You have the talent of conveying somebody’s unattractiveness in a name. I am very impressed. ;)
"Yup. And you look like my mother when you stand like that. Stop it. It's creepy." He said shoving a handful of popcorn into his mouth. -> The Trickster’s cute, no doubt about it. But his mother should think about dressing her age…
HA HA! Elyse is the greatest.
Why is that I’m still crazy about that Patrick jerk? (Because you’re such a wonderul writer, is the answer…)
Patrick’s thoughts on the stockings are so male, it’s like a documentary. (Porn?)
WHY IS HE SO CONFIDENT? Does he know he’s the bomb in bed?
Bridget, you are so awesome for not making this “perfect” or mushy. It’s so real, I LOVE it! :)
Author's responselol. I love naming characters for that reason; Yea Patrick's Mommy really shouldn't be rocking those mini's; Elyse IS the greatest; Patrick and the stockings--I had to give the little boy a kink. this is me we're talking about; Patrick is so confidant because lets face it, for all that she was an uberslore (slut+whore) Allison was supposed to be HOT. That's gotta give a boy a big ego boost. He had to be doing something right; Until I actually have perfect sex I refuse to write it. lol.
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