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A Little More Touch Me
(#) Frenchie189 2007-01-24
lmao. i love it. please update soon?Author's response
Hey, cool, I made you laugh. So proud!!
Thanks for reading, lady xxA Little More Touch Me
(#) ZippersOverYou 2007-01-24
Uber sweet...the relationship between the members is unforgettable. Great job. Please update soon.Author's response
Thanks for the uber sweet review, Zips.
And hey, I'll update if you will?!!? :-)
xxxA Little More Touch Me
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-01-24
I. Love. This. Story.
Seriously.
I think I just smile the entire time I'm reading it. Giggling Patrick, cocky Pete, adorably cute Joe, and of course hottie Andy with his eye on the girl in the leopard print... you've got it all. I gave you a 'funny' but I was very close to ambiance. Update soon!!!Author's response
Reviews like your just make my day. You make me want to write all the time, just to get super-duper review like this. Unfortunately, work calls (cause a girl has to eat!) But I will be updating real soon. xxxxxA Little More Touch Me
(#) patrickdance4me 2007-01-24
hehe. i love this story to death. cant wait for more! btw joe=hot :]Author's response
Ah, I thank you, for you were my inspiration xxA Little More Touch Me
(#) LOVELA 2007-01-24
Yes, toying with Pete WOULD be too much fun....I mean...wait. what?
I really liked the banter between all the boys. Lovely writing as usual. Rating point worthy? Of course.Author's response
Mmmm, mental pictures of Pete in compromising position.............
Ooh, sorry, lost my concentration ;-)
Smooches for the rating point, lady xxA Little More Touch Me
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-25
You have outdone yourself. Again. Lass.
I'm so digging your scene where Patrick has an entire tooth-pick factory up his ass when it comes to music, where Andy is a ladykiller, where Pete is... Pete and Joe...sighs how could we not write about dorky Joe? I so loved it when he messed up on his guitar when Megan showed up.
I find it über-plinky that your and my stories have some things in common but are so different on other levels. Probably mainly because you can actually write proper English. But let's not get technical...
Update soon, I am dying to know what happens next.(Especially at the "lawyer" party! ;) )
The rating point is just a standard feature with my reviews to you...Author's response
I think it's probably wrong that I'm even finding Joe's dorkyness sexy. God, my hormones must be haywire lately :-)
And I find it Uber-plinky that you think our stories have something in common, cause you know how much I'm loving 'Canine Cupid', don't you?
And does Scottish count as proper English? I hope so :-)
Thanks for the Rating point hugs xxA Little More Touch Me
(#) sing4me09 2007-01-25
haha...right laywers
nice one!Author's response
I know it was kinda obvious but I just couldn't help myself ;-)A Little More Touch Me
(#) fob4ever 2007-01-25
haha. this is great. updates?? haha. "lawyers"Author's response
Glad you liked it. Promise to update SOON!!A Little More Touch Me
(#) prettypoizon 2007-01-31
I laughed so hard I cried. Absolutely hilarious.
"Do they let guide dogs in clubs nowadays?" Pete added through his laughter. "Chick must be blind," he muttered.
LMAOAuthor's response
You have no idea how much I love you for back-reviewing. And thank you for being so positive.You made my day, lady :-)
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