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Sisters
19 reviewsIt is a tendency for pledging in a sorority to occasionally be a bit more than what the pledges bargained for... this is not the life for the faint of heart. Fall Out Boy included: Andy. Enjoy my f...
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Sisters
(#) CoraLiz 2007-01-31
Oh, Gwen! You know, if the Sisters find out you wrote this, we might send YOU out into the woods. Be afraid. Be very afraid.
Otherwise, nice story. It took me forever to read... you probably should have broken it down into parts or something. But it was still super-dooper amazing!Author's response
Yikes! Don't throw me in the woods, it's cold out! Besides, you know you all love me too much...
And for some reason I was set on having it all one story/chapter. Breaking it up felt funny given the topic. I thought about cutting it in half right when she hears about the F&F but then the first half is all action-based and the second part all lovie-dovie. Glad you liked!Sisters
(#) riaryder 2007-01-31
Super-duper, lady!
Original, well-written and drama-rama galore, with a little bit of romance thrown in. What more could a girl want :-)
Congrats on your first one-shot. I hope there are many more.
And I always have a point to spare for the good stuff xAuthor's response
Thank you for the lovely point as well as the praise. You're pretty great, yourself! :)Sisters
(#) SongbirdFlyAway 2007-01-31
whoa!
hello new favorite story ever!
andy stories are my favorite and this one is definitely starting out great!Author's response
I'm so glad you liked it... and Andy! He's one of my favs too! (You know, right up there with Patrick, Pete, and Joe... lol)Sisters
(#) SongbirdFlyAway 2007-01-31
ps - i'm kinda sad that you're not continuing this story. :( hahaAuthor's response
haha, who knows, maybe if I get a good response I'll do another with the same theme and characters... I mean, I guess the society won't be happy she learned of their secrets then bailed... hmmmSisters
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-31
This has major literary quality. (Even though, I am probably not the right person to judge that... shrugs)
Very impressive, very ambiance-y. It's going on my favs.
I loved how Sophie thought about Andy all the time, starting when she got up to when she was in the woods. I always feel when you mix some action with the character's thoughts, it takes the story to a whole new exciting level.
Take a point and please write more. You are seriously and dangerously talented. :)Author's response
You are WAY too nice to me. Honestly. But I will take the point and cherish it always. :)Sisters
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-02-01
I don't like Andy stories at all, I personally prefer Patrick, but WOW! I absolutely loved it. Your writing is amazing!Author's response
Aw, I'm sorry you don't like Andy stories, but I'll take all your compliments. :) Thanks!Sisters
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-02-01
wow. this is like so emotional yet...ugh. i cant even think it was that good! keep up the good work!Author's response
Thanks... I think. :) And I DO need to write some more on The Mistake...Sisters
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-02-16
Totally true -
Andy DOES need action!
where's the love for the drummers anymore, honestly.
This was an amazing story i enjoyed it immensely.
You're one of my favorites.
xxxxoSisters
(#) demstterrrx3 2007-02-26
That was pretty incredible.
I really love Andy, though. So i might be biased. :)
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