- Oh, Gwen! You know, if the Sisters find out you wrote this, we might send YOU out into the woods. Be afraid. Be very afraid.
Otherwise, nice story. It took me forever to read... you probably should have broken it down into parts or something. But it was still super-dooper amazing!
Author's responseYikes! Don't throw me in the woods, it's cold out! Besides, you know you all love me too much...
And for some reason I was set on having it all one story/chapter. Breaking it up felt funny given the topic. I thought about cutting it in half right when she hears about the F&F but then the first half is all action-based and the second part all lovie-dovie. Glad you liked!
- Super-duper, lady!
Original, well-written and drama-rama galore, with a little bit of romance thrown in. What more could a girl want :-)
Congrats on your first one-shot. I hope there are many more.
And I always have a point to spare for the good stuff x
Author's responseThank you for the lovely point as well as the praise. You're pretty great, yourself! :)
(#) SongbirdFlyAway 2007-01-31ps - i'm kinda sad that you're not continuing this story. :( haha
Author's responsehaha, who knows, maybe if I get a good response I'll do another with the same theme and characters... I mean, I guess the society won't be happy she learned of their secrets then bailed... hmmm
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-01-31This has major literary quality. (Even though, I am probably not the right person to judge that... shrugs)
Very impressive, very ambiance-y. It's going on my favs.
I loved how Sophie thought about Andy all the time, starting when she got up to when she was in the woods. I always feel when you mix some action with the character's thoughts, it takes the story to a whole new exciting level.
Take a point and please write more. You are seriously and dangerously talented. :)
Author's responseYou are WAY too nice to me. Honestly. But I will take the point and cherish it always. :)
Sign up to review this story.