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Umm... Ava is pretty much a lightweight.
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The Mistake
(#) Frenchie189 2007-02-09
Fire. Haha. Fire.
Sorry, for some reason that word amuses me. LOL.
Anyway, I love the story!
Update soon.Author's response
Fire... I'm sure it amuses Ava, too, especially in her state of mind. I bet the two of you would get along nicely.The Mistake
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-02-09
i just read through your entire story and i absolutely love it, i cant wait to read more!Author's response
Thank you very much... I can't wait to write more!The Mistake
(#) hips-n-hearts86 2007-02-09
Can Patrick and Ava be anymore cuter?! lol Loved it! Update soon. Your story is like my new drug LOLAuthor's response
Aw, thanks! My story is like a drug... I can't tell you how much I love your reviews, even though I doubt I deserve them. ;) You make me want to go write some more...The Mistake
(#) whatkatydid 2007-02-10
OMG - this is intense. I'm assuming it is like an ACTUAL fire and not firey passion....damn.
That's harsh times right there...Author's response
Ooo, firey passion, that would be nice, didn't think of that. ;)The Mistake
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-02-10
oh my god!
update!!
soon!!
PLEASE!!
i'm giving you a rating point cause i loved this chapter!!
nd there will another one as soon as you update!!Author's response
Ooo, is that a bribe with the point... because I can totally be bought off, I don't pretend to have intregity. ;) But I'm so glad you liked it!The Mistake
(#) LiveLoud 2007-02-10
You always do this. Stop leaving your readers hanging! btw, the drunken part was too funny.Author's response
I'm glad you like the drunken bit. I almost took it out because that seems to be popular but I couldn't get Patrick there with the same sort of humor. And I'm sorry about the hanging part, but it's so much fun!The Mistake
(#) riaryder 2007-02-10
Ah, it's been too long, lady.
Drunk Ava was great. Hilarious.
And can she take any more drama? More to the point, can I?
Oh you know I've always always got points for you xxAuthor's response
I'm glad you like drunk Ava... I wish she would be drunk all the time. :) Anyway, I HOPE you can take more drama... that is what I write, after all. But I was just thinking... I've had an explosion (well, 2 of them kin-of), a shooting, best friend dies, spider attack and now a fire. Poor poor Ava... And thank you for the point!!!The Mistake
(#) XTinkerbellX 2007-02-10
I love this story so much.The spider chapter was a little hard to read considering I loathe spiders too.
I hope you update soon.Author's response
And I love you for loving my story! I'm sorry it was hard to read, it was hard for me to write. But don't worry, no more bugs. :)The Mistake
(#) FallOutGrl 2007-02-11
Oh my god girl!!!! This just keeps getting better and better! And Patrick is such a sweetheart. Even if Ava is a bid childish while drunk....but hey, aren't we all? Lol, keep up the good work hunn!
p.s. Rating Point For You!!!!Author's response
Aw, thanks! You're absolutely right about the childish drunken part... I think I modeled that aspect of Ava after myself (or at least what everyone tells me, lol) Thank you for the point!
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