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• The Mistake

  (#) journeythrutime 2007-02-11

  i love your story!!! its really really good!!! please continue, its super intriguing (sp?) lol ok good job, keep it up!

  Author's response

  THANKS!!! :D I shall continue, and hopefully it will stay good...

• The Mistake

  (#) FrostedGlass 2007-02-12

  Ach... Not being able to rate SUCKS.
  
  This was one of the your best chapters to date, Gwen. I think you got the drunk part across really well.
  
  First the model thing disturbed me but I'd be a hypocrite if I held onto that feeling. ;) It's reassuring to learn that somebody who can date (or whatever) Patrick Stump is insecure about her looks. ;)
  
  Sorry that this review lacks sense but that's what happens when I try to multitask. Just know that I still think you're one hell of a writer. :)

  Author's response

  I'm sorry about the disturbing model part... That is the result of actually HAVING those stupid pictures up around my own apartment (my roomie and I are aparently preparing for spring break in this manner) and a severe case of writers block. And thank you for all your kind words, I always look forward to your reviews. :)

• The Mistake

  (#) Oreo-child 2007-02-12

  Oh my frigging goldfish! Keep going!

  Author's response

  Alright!!!

• The Mistake

  (#) punkypromqueen 2007-02-15

  you are my new favorite - and you can pretty much kill me for not reviewing before this but i am in love with this story and you most definitely needed to know that.
  can't wait for the update!
  xxxxxo

  Author's response

  Yay! I'm a new favorite. How exciting! And I'm glad you like my story, it totally makes my day!

• The Mistake

  (#) ssketchator 2007-06-01

  I'm going to be honest and say that I have been known, on a few occasions, to act like that.
  
  It's great fun.
  
  I like this, I like the Patrick/Drunk Ava conversation. This story keeps making me smile.

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