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• Harry's Return

  (#) irishfighter 2007-02-16

  thank you, thank you, thank you, I have been waiting for an update. Please update soon.

• Harry's Return

  (#) slashslut 2007-02-16

  greatness! i love it when harry foils dumbles evil plans smirks

• Harry's Return

  (#) Geovanni_Luciano 2007-02-16

  Thisis an interesting story. You need to read it yourself. While you did use spell checker, you need to check the context of the correctly spelled words, such as using to instead of too, and using where instead of were. Additionally, you need to check your comma and semi-colon usage as well. I don't want to disuade you and hope that you continue your story.
  
  Geovanni Luciano

• Harry's Return

  (#) pi3142 2007-02-16

  I think you have potential - keep it up (a beta would help too).

• Harry's Return

  (#) SotF 2007-02-16

  This is an interesting and original story. Please update soon, I really would like to be able to read more

• Harry's Return

  (#) Ten-Speed 2007-02-19

  cool

• Harry's Return

  (#) kcgx23 2007-02-21

  Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.

• Harry's Return

  (#) jfitzgerald236 2007-02-25

  I hope that you will update this story soon. Thanks.

• Harry's Return

  (#) billybobcs 2007-04-14

  I am very interrested in where this story goes

• Harry's Return

  (#) Jimm 2007-04-28

  While you have some interesting ideas and dialog, this would benefit a lot from editing for punctuation and correct word choice.
  
  Still, thanks for sharing it with us.

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