thank you, thank you, thank you, I have been waiting for an update. Please update soon.
greatness! i love it when harry foils dumbles evil plans smirks
Thisis an interesting story. You need to read it yourself. While you did use spell checker, you need to check the context of the correctly spelled words, such as using to instead of too, and using where instead of were. Additionally, you need to check your comma and semi-colon usage as well. I don't want to disuade you and hope that you continue your story.
I think you have potential - keep it up (a beta would help too).
(#) SotF 2007-02-16
This is an interesting and original story. Please update soon, I really would like to be able to read more
Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.
I hope that you will update this story soon. Thanks.
I am very interrested in where this story goes
(#) Jimm 2007-04-28
While you have some interesting ideas and dialog, this would benefit a lot from editing for punctuation and correct word choice.
Still, thanks for sharing it with us.
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