(#) lady_venom_x 2007-02-24That was awesome.
Sara is fucked up.
But I like her in the story. Ohhh please tell me she's not totally gone yet!
I love to hate her!
Author's responseI was readin' it back thinking it sucked so thank you:) Hells no she ain't gone!; i'm having way too much fun writing her!! DAMN, i just gave too much away-lol :)
(#) MyVengefulRomance 2007-02-24I agree. She IS bipolar. And...I believe Frank over her, she's too untrustworthy. But great chapter and UPDATE!!!! (Ha, she fell down the stairs. Too bad she didn't break anything.) blinks Wait...Mikey was raped! AHHHHHH!!!!! hyperventilates OMG! I'm gonna cry myself to sleep now. runs off sobbing
Author's responseYeah, poor Mikey :(...i can't belive i did that (well it wasn't me, but i wrote it-lol). First i kill his mum (in a story of course) and then i make someone rape him!! I'm almost as bad as you!! she MIGHT have broken her ankle........evil laugh she is in pain!!! WOO!
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-02-24good riddance!
i understand COMPLETELY about the dreaded writer's block..damnit! damn it all to hell! hehe
I liked this chapter though...got a little confession of some sorts from sara...or was it really??? oh well, who the bleep raped poor Mikes????
Author's responselol- I don't know when i write it in...i have ideas for more confusion-lol :) It was sorta a confession, that's if she really does love him??!! [which she might or might not] :) I HATE WRITER's BLOCK!!!!!!! (2 right DAMN it to hell)!!
(#) AlexSanDee 2007-02-25This was good, don't even think writer block...its an evil thing. I'm sure what you deleted was good too. A very well written and interesting story!!
Author's responseAn evil evil thing!! Thank you that means a lot but trust me, what i had before was complete crap! :)
- Why you get rid of her? They should have lcoked up and studied her like a scientific experiment...or not. sighs I'm gonna miss her...not much though. Just like a tiny bit. A tiny particle somewhere in my head that's liek awww. Poor Sara. The rest of it's like, 'She deserved it.'
M4PM. (Btw update this and update Vote MAtt!)
Author's responseLMAO- there might still be a chance for scientists...or atleast prison guards covers mouth DAMN...must not give stuff away!!! Vote Matt will be updated soon!!!...i kinda promise! :)
(#) DemolitionLuvars 2007-03-29I saw him grin, "What happened Mikey?" He turned to me, seriously concerned and touched me gently on the shoulder. "What kind of noises." Frank asked confused. He looked to the ground, slightly embarrassed. "So, you, eh think you were raped?" he asked me. feeling like I was swallowing something; a pill. "Yeah, I suppose," he answered hesitantly
Frank had his way with him...didnt he ha ha ha that part was so funny reading! :X "I remember when I got to my room last night being exhausted, I just collapsed on the bed and fell asleep, fully clothed." I took a nervous drag on my smoke, "I woke up this morning stark fucking naked thats SO FREAKIN FUNNY!
Author's responseLMAO- damn, is it that obvious?-lol, no Frank didn't...but that would be well funny in a really really sick way :):):)
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