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Learning to Love Again
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-07
"Are you trying to seduce me?" he asked with a quirky smile. -> Why do I find that so hot? Right: IT’S PATRICK SHY-UMP ASKING!
/Patrick's eyes were all over her, feeling his skin hot under the collar as his alcohol covered wife fussed before him.
"Patrick?" She said quickly, then she looked up at him, it had been a long time, but she knew exactly what those eyes wanted. Within a second, his lips were on hers, kissing her like they were teenagers, her hands fumbling with whatever they could hold on to.
"Here's an idea..." he said in a low voice and skilfully unzipped the dress and it shot to the floor quickly. Shay stared at him in disbelief./ -> It’s a fact that the more you leave to the imagination, the sexier it is. And this was utterly sexy…
I CAN’T BELIEVE HE ANSWERED THE GODDAMN CELL!!! AARRRGGGHHHH!!!
And then he even calls her a bitch… huffs
:*(
The whole part that deals with Shay and Pete sharing intimate moments was so beautifully written that I can’t even think of words to describe it. (Obviously, you could.) I am so impressed. Believe me when I say I couldn’t do it like this. I could never write like this. I am too impatient and probably too lazy. The way you write this story, Katy, takes my breath away.Learning to Love Again
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-04-10
oh i'm killing that fucker. end of. i can't believe patrick would answer his phone. and i can't believe that pete is so...well, there for shay.
list? (i know it took me forever to get to this...)
1.)/This was passion. This had been what she'd craved for so long. That dampness on your legs as you lay entwined, where you both worked so hard to bring each other to that important place.
She finally had it back and it made her the happiest she'd been for years.
As she tried to close her eyes and rest, the plagued steps that brought her here resurfaced.../
that is such a wide range of emotions, and i think that captured it perfectly. even though (at the time when i was reading it) it didn't quite make sense. it was wonderful because it had me thinking that she was that lost in her relationship with Patrick. i just didn't know she was that lost. you are amazing, woman.
2.)/"WHAT DO YOU WANT FROM ME SHAY??!" He yelled, she froze. His eyes were furious...She walked up to him slowly and he saw the tears seep shyly from her eyes.
Wriggling her wedding band off she pushed it into his hands.
"Nothing." She said coldly./ i almost cried. that is huge for me. i never almost cry.
3.)/It was also within the boundaries of that betraying, perfidious act, that a child was conceived. A child that would be placed as a reminder of their infidelity towards not only Patrick but themselves. Every time that child would speak, act or move, it would represent them and their lack of self control and demand for things from each other they couldn't find anywhere else. / WHAT?!?!?!?! when CeCe said "you are going to love/hate this" she was not kidding. just when i think it can't get any better, you throw something like that in.
i'm printing off the next chapter as i type this. wish me luck.
by the way, you rock at this FicWad business. thanks for reppin' the DoJ
1.)Learning to Love Again
(#) LackOfColor 2007-10-20
oh
my
god
that was amazing. what a twist! i love this story. i really just can't stop reading!
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