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Reflections
1 reviewthis is basically what happens when Naruto's mind is left to its own devices and he doesn't stop himself from thinking about certain topics --Sasuke, in particular.
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Letting Go
(#) Yame_Uchiha1 2007-03-30
It was a little boring. I almost fell asleep.Author's response
well, what part of it was boring and how do you suggest that i fix it? This is a slow-moving story at first, but then it picks up and lightens up --probably by the 3rd chapter. I really appreciate that you took the time to criticize my work and tell me that it could use some work to appeal to a larger crowd than it does, but i need more than a rough outline of that problem in order to fix it. If you would give me the honor of acknowledging this response, please be a little more specific about what was so boring to you.
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