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Chapter 8: That Went Well?
3 reviewsWe learn a little bit more about the ex girlfriend. Patrick meets Jeremy....
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Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-01
I really like the story. Charlie and Patrick seem great for each other.Author's response
Thank you very muchly. More to come :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) luckysgc921 2007-04-01
damn you woman!
with your cliffhang-edness.
Jocelyn is officially my favorite fanfic character ever. just for the record. "we shoulda just let him starve" HA! Peter wishes he was as witty as Jocelyn.
I can sympathize with Jeremey though. I used to get pissed at my mom for the new boyfriends. and well...at that age if she had brought home thinks Chris Robinson of The Black Crowes I probably wouldn't have been all too happy with her either. (But at least Chris is more then 10 years older then I am)
I heart the cupcake. but you knew that.
i heart you. but I think you knew that too.
(umm...more please? and Addicts?)Author's response
Pete wishes he was a three year old girl...I mean...who knows what I mean. I think you'd be pretty psyched if your mom brought home Chris fucking Robinson. I know I would be. I'd be like "Mother, go up stairs and spawn some musical geniuses. Right now." But that's another story entirely. And keep your pants on, I'm working on an Addict update, love. :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-01
" felt like I was somehow marooned on a stagnant island, left to shrink in the distance as my peers sailed on to the next level of adulthood. " OK - WOW? That was amazing!
I loved this chapter Kyle, the food, the convo's, the kids, the sexiness....I'm so enjoying reading this, every single word, I lie not.
I love how each chapter is little cliffhanger that you dangle me over. Until your next chappie, I'm just gonna hang out here on this cliff top and wait to die....
x
ha!Author's response
I love pirate analogies and I felt that this story needed one. Now, I think you're being slightly dramatic. I won't let you die on my literary cliff. Bring some sandwiches, a couple of capri suns, and some sunblock and you'll be fine. Just don't jump or anything.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) riaryder 2007-04-05
Ah, lady!
I love that little girl and her three-year-old wittiness.
And you write the teenage boy thing so well. That made me laugh. Like a lot.
You're really spoiling me with the quick updating thing. I'm hoping that's going to become habit, because you know I love this story, right?
Yay, you. Have a point xxAuthor's response
Miss Ria! More angry teenage boyness to come, I promise. As for the quick updatage...don't hold your breath. But I'll try. :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) pixied_secrets 2007-04-09
couple of things i loved:
1.)/
"I thought there was going to be a bear suit involved." I laughed.
"Not until the forth date. I'm no hussy." / hussy...hahaha. i almost forgot that word existed. thank you.
2.)so they're exclusive but he hasn't mentioned to her that he may be fathering a child? he is a hussy.
3.)/"How did you feel when your mom brought home some new guy?" I felt angry, betrayed...
"Shit."/ perfect. there was no better way to do that. god, you are amazing. i'm sorry... i meant, GodKyle
4.)/"I think that went well. What do you think?" She shrugged at my question.
"We shoulda just let him starve." Amen to that. / i loved it.
you are GodKyle.Author's response
Woman! Where have you been? I forgive you only because I miss you terribly. That didn't make much sense, but when do I ever make sense? Love your lists and the fact that you refer to me as my alter-ego. Sadly, it didn't catch on here in Pennsylvania. Get your butt on AIM one of these days, Pancho.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-16
"Would you...consider being...exclusive? With me?" -> God, that’s cute.
Never told you, I think, but I admire your broad vocabulary. (And that doesn’t only refer to swear words, dear. ;) )
/"He's almost five foot eight, Patrick."
Jesus...how did such a small woman spawn such a behemoth of a son?/ -> I have been waiting for this, Kyle. ;)
Joce rocks… but you knew that.
Loved it!!!Author's response
Alex? Is that you? You're becoming as mythological as Crystal and Sarah.:) I figured you'd show up one of these days. Maybe when we finally have our AIM/ass grabbing party, I'll teach you some of those truly American swear words.Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) WhitneyAnne 2007-04-16
Loving this, Kyle! Actually all your stories! I hope you update this soon.Author's response
Aw, Thank you Whitney. :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) CC28 2007-04-23
Normally I'm not a reviewer but I love this story so very much that I was hopeing this might prompt an update. I understand that life can get in the way of writing but this is to let you know that you are doing a great job! Keep it up.Author's response
Aw, thank you for taking the time to review. My brain is a little overloaded, but I do have a story line planned out, I'm just trying to be creative enough to fill in the gaps. I'm working on it though :)Rock The Cradle of Love
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-08-15
oh my god, amazing. this is by far one of the BEST fan fictions I have ever read. Update soon.Author's response
Wooo! Thank you, love! I'm working on an update :)
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