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Chapter 28
14 reviewsCheyenne and Donna view the house, Lyn schemes to get back in the game and Amber and Bob make plans with Gerard and Cheyenne.
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(#) AlexSanDee 2007-04-07
OMG the part where they were "viewing" the bedroom, how hot!! I love this story so much but then you know that! OK mum's B-Day was a success so no more excuses not to write more!!! Demanding aren't I?Author's response
Demanding? you never shifts eyes lol Yeah I know you love the story but I don't get tired of hearing that you do and you know that I LOVE your story so were even. Yeah I haven't written any sexual bits for a while I was kinda overdue for writing one, I'm glad it's good I was worried that it wasn't. Speak to you laterForbidden
(#) zaberdeenz 2007-04-07
mhiiii,that's so great you got Franks autograph. well, you got to MCR gig, so that's greast by it self..grinnnn
okay, G and Chey are hot together. but maan, i was already picturing in my head what would happen if Donna and Pat would've walked in. anyrays, i laugheg a loot when G was pretending to look out the window to ...put himself to his pants. glares the sentence it was funny. i also alrays find those little comments they throw at eachother, veery amusing.nodity-nod i really like Bob in this story, (not that i dont love Bob in rl too) he and Amber go nicely together.
but theeeeeeeeeen. takes deep breaths couldnt that dirty, sneaky, lame, stupid, throwing-herself-at-other-peoples-men, bitchy T-R-A-S-H-I-E just crawl back to the hole she came and live there with other bugs? No? damn.
le sigh
well, im really impatient to SEE THE DRA-MAH! ^_______^ so you know what you gotta do? keeeeeeep it coming. i love it.Author's response
Hey you, how I've missed you this past week lol. You know I was going to let them get caught but then I thought that's just plain awkward not to mention disturbing and wrong. I love Bob too but he won't be loveable for too long so get your fill while you can. I said it before and I'll say it agin you have a truely unique way of describing people, 7 burns in one sentence that's amazing you have gift lol. Well gotta go the next chapter beckons so I need to go get creative. waves byeForbidden
(#) pinkkissypetefreak 2007-04-07
damn. you lucky, lucky girl.
oh well. as usual..Lyn is crazy as hell,
the smutty secks was amazing. and funny
for some odd reason. i guess i could picture that happening. shrugs
anyway, glad to hear the party was a success!Author's response
I'm glad you thought the "smutty" section was good, I contemplated letting them get caught but that's just weird right? Yeah Lyn's as crazy as ever but she'll get crazier just wait and see. As for the party I'm never throwing one again I'm sure I gained about 20lb and my once black fringe is now grey lolForbidden
(#) cutegirl12356 2007-04-07
LOL....That rocks....Can't wait for more...Great chapter...And i'm glad your mom's birthday was a success! Much love always....Ashley....AKA...Cutegirl12356!Author's response
So you're names Ashley that's a cute name, a cute name for cutegirl12356 I guess lol. Thanks for the review and I'll see you next chapter.Forbidden
(#) xXBrokenxRosesXx 2007-04-13
OMFG That Was Hot And So So Amazing Upate. Write More Soon. This WHole Story Is Amazingly Good. Its Awesome.Forbidden
(#) WynonaKing90 2007-04-23
psh,
i went to the damn black parade concert too, and mikey wasn't there so i was pissed...and my friend almost got us kicked out by yelling, 'fucking sellouts!' to them after the show (and saying other profanities). it was highly embarassing/the worst concert in my life/ and there were a bunch of preppies there whick really pissed me off.
their old concerts were better =/.
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