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Chapter 10
10 reviewsPeyton Clarkson's boyfriend had just signed with one of the biggest recording companies around, and now hes heading out to tour with another major band, Fall Out Boy. What happens when he can't alw...
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(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-09
Rindi... You are amazing.
I don't know what else to say...
Ok, that's a lie, I have SOOO MUCH to say: First of all... I knew anyone with the name Gwen could be TERRIBLE. I mean, we Gwens have to stick togethere here, and I'm not gonna lie- I like her a whole bunch better now. Before I was like 'what a little whore'. And well, Pete was quite amazing, too. Who knew he was such a softie?
And OMG- Peyton and Patrick?!?!?! Can anyone say 'sizzle sizzle'? Because I sure can. (sizzle sizzle sizzle sizzle) Now I'msitting here wanting to learn to play the guitar for myself. If only there was a Patrick to teach me. sigh He is quite dreamy here. Great job, my dear!!
And Oliver... acting like a big baby. I could tell Pey and he almost had a sweet little scene at the begining, but I'm glad it ended the way it did. I'm even glad Oliver is feeling badly for this entire mess... it IS his fault after all.
And the girly fight... (smile) I can totally picture it... Patrick getting in the one good punch and running away. Excellent. I could totally picture it. (And Joe's thoughts on the matter were indeed spiffy: the hair pulling even though there wasn't much hair to pull. lol. I love it!)
Ok, so, as always I rated, because you're just so freakin amazing. And you know I totally love you and whatnot... Sooo... FANTASTIC JOB!!!!!
Ok, enough essay, I'll go write now... ;)Author's response
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL GWEN!!!!! I get soo much praise from you it scares me. Whats even funnier is the fact that were IMing each other and yet I'm responding to your review. Might I just say I love the little sizzle sizzle sizzle lol It made me totally laugh out loud..and I think my brother heard me and knocked too LOL He prolly thinks I'm psycho now! LOL anywho..yes Oliver is the biggest baby you will ever meet..just wait he gets worse..alot worse and Peyton and Patrick..wow they kept me occupied for hours at work..I was soo day dreaming of them and their scene and what happens in the next chapter. lol and I had to have Joe see the girly fight..and I really can't write a good fight (also see crappy sexish scene lol) and Joe describing it was kind of happy/funny in its own special way. WOW you had better go and write right now missy! I'm watching YOU..lol PS. LOVED YOUR REVIEW AND YOUR MY BESTEST!Falter
(#) danceislife 2007-04-09
OMG! Okay so at first, when I saw that illusive red x, I was all excited. Then when she and Oliver were having playful banter, I was freaking yelling No at my computer. Sneaky sneaky!Author's response
Ah yes the illusive red can be quite decieving HAHA I'm glad you liked it? lolFalter
(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-09
Loved it!! I loved that Patrick beat Oliver. I knew he wasn't all quiet. Also, loved the guitar lesson and what it turned into. Can't wait for more!!Author's response
LOL I loved the guitar scene too, I had that one bouncing in my head for quite sometime.Falter
(#) -LoVe-CaNt-SaVe-YoU- 2007-04-10
this story kicks ass!
just read it straight through its brilliant!
update soon!Author's response
Thank you soooo muchFalter
(#) punkypromqueen 2007-04-10
FRAKING YAY!
i've been waiting for a Peyton Patrick hookup - and that just made my life.
Oliver being a big ginormous child, i kind of want to jsut slap him around a bit, i probably would if i wasn't so scared of him - he's a scary dude.
Also i'm so glad Gwen was drugged - i was sad for a second that she was such a whore.
great job!!!
xxxoAuthor's response
LOL yes Gwen is not a whore, I mean come on shes Peyton's sister..and well Gwen has to be good! lol Oliver on the otherhand..well..I think he needs serious help and asap. Believe me he gets worse..and IFalter
(#) riaryder 2007-04-10
Ah, you little minx.
That was hot. And exciting. And sad for poor poor Gwen who I now feel sorry for calling a hoe.
And did I mention it was hot? But I can't believe you left it THERE.
Great update. Just great.
You can have a point if you don't leave me hanging too long. Yes, that'll be that bribery thing again :-)Author's response
There is a reason for my madness mind you I promise the next chapter will be just as good! LOL and I feel bad for everyone thinking Gwen is a Ho..but she really isn't...well..you haven't heard Peyton's side yet so yeah LOL and YES the bribery thing again! I think I will have to type out a Chapter faster next time thenFalter
(#) jaredletoinconverse 2007-04-10
WHY DID YOU STOP THERE?? So not cool! Yeah, the story rocks! Of course! Please update asap!Author's response
ummm because I'm evil??!??! lol No I have plans..don't worry..Falter
(#) LOVELA 2007-04-10
It's about time Patrick and Peyton got it on!
I love the whole twist on the Peyton/Gwen/Oliver drama as well. We all know I LOVE drama.
And Pete searching for his sidekick...that's me everyday looking for my keys. I giggled.
Good job on this chapter. It was fab!Author's response
LOL the Pete searching for his sidekick is me always look for my phone..so yeah I had to throw that in there..as for everything else..well...
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