(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-15saaaaahhhhhhhhwwweeeeeeeeeet! I hope you don't mind but I laughed hard as hell part way through this...for this reason:
He replied while pulling a shit over his head. The vision was what made me laugh...and then:
/She huffed as she picked up the shit he had tossed onto the floor and wiped her nose on it.
Oh yeahhhh - that's it right there.
Lemme tell you a story about when I was working at this bank, I'd drafted an email in response to a complaint and in the subject was "Can you please check this so it's not s*"
She checked it, it was fine and then I sent it on.....without changing the subject header....yeah. Not cool.
I was always asking people for their shit sheets, instead of shift sheets....rolls eyes
Brilliant chapter BTW.
One of my favourite stories on here. :)
Author's responselmao, i can't believe i as well as my self proclaimed editor missed the fact that i totally did that. lmao well i totally pulled a Jesus moved and turned shit into shirt - just because. lol. but i'm glad that you like my story it means lot to me to hear you say that.
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-15so in reality i had this huge rambling review typed out where i went on about how happy i was that you updated and how giddy and smiley and wooo! i am after reading this, but apparently, ficwad hates me, and only posted the first word. wtf? so yeah, i just wanted to let you know that you're the bestest ever, and maybe this time, ficwas will allow you to know that.
Author's response:) your reviews (as well as updates) always make me smile so i'm so glad that i made you smile in return with an update of mine. :)
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-04-15Oooo!!! Updated! Yay!!!!
Ok, so I'm a little excited.
Anyway, I thought this chapter was fantastic!!! Finally, we see the end (possibly?) of Meg. She was such a bitch, and Patrick at last grew some balls and told her how he really feels about her. Yayyy!!!
And OMG, Kate is like the COOLEST! One of my favorite lines:
/ "What the fuck is so funny, I just kicked your ass!" Meg yelled annoyed, which continued to fuel Kate's laughter.
"What's so fucking funny?" Meg questioned again as her annoyance grew.
"Well just the fact that it's my turn now." Kate smiled/
She is a total badass. I wish I could be just like her when I grow up.
And yay for Gwen attempting to shake some sense into Patrick! He really needed that. You know, I've actually been wanting to do that all along.
Oh, and also, Completely adored Rose. Her character, I feel, is going to easily be one of my favorites. Her litte 'make love, not war' until she realized that Kate had been hit. Classic. (As well as Andy's frustration at not getting laid. lol)
Ok, so I guess this review is not one of my best, but please know that I think it is simply WONDERFUL and I can't wait for more updates because you know how excited I get about Kate and Patrick. So have a point for your devine writing skills. You totally rock, Alex!
Author's responsei don't care what you say your review was amazing as usual,
and i think everyone should aspire to be like Kate when they grow up.
and Patrick shaking Gwen, probably the best thing to happen since the creation of the written word. lol.
and ahh Andy and Rose - best couple ever. lol.
as always you made my day with your review, and i hope the chapters to come don't dissappoint.
(#) ssketchator 2007-05-29I can't help but feel bad for Meg in this chapter. Like, obviously I want her gone so Patrick and Kate can be together. But you can really see how much she cares about him and how upset she really is.
It was kind of itchy... Too good.
Man, if Kate could give Patrick two shiners, imagine what a full-force hit woulda done to Meg.
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