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Thirteen - Bar-B-Que Sauce.
11 reviewsok this chapter goes by pretty fast, the whole thing takes place within a week - so cool. have fun with this.
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(#) patricksgirl84 2007-04-21
I love this story so much!!Author's response
thank you.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) whatkatydid 2007-04-22
You know I love you right? xxxxAuthor's response
and i love you with the intensity of one thousand suns.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) jaredletoinconverse 2007-04-22
aww emo patrick! meh... love it! please write more asapAuthor's response
lol. i'm glad you like it, thank you so mcuh.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) watch_the_sky 2007-04-22
um, i love you, basically. i hate sad patrick. i wish someone would just slap some sense into both of them already. blah. this story is the happiness that consumes my life whenever you update. so update soon, please and thank you.Author's response
yeah patrick depressed is not fun times. i'm glad however that it consumes your life, because it consumes mine as well. lol.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) danceislife 2007-04-22
gah. Joe and Kate are gonna be in one big mess if they don't stop this whole charade soon.Author's response
i think something bigger will come along before Kate and Joe screw things up any more.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Melim 2007-04-22
Review.
That's all you get for yelling at me yesterday, cuz I totally helped you out. And for throwing a damn bottle at my face.Author's response
yes you helped me - and you are such a drama queen it was an empty plastic bottle that was meant to hit you in the chest not your face.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) fobgal1 2007-04-22
LOL! I loved it. Grrrr I just wish Joe and Kate would quit with the game so Patrick and Kate can be together. Please update soon.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-04-22
All I gots to say is DAAYYYY-UUUMMMM. Aaaannd that I love you. "I ain't kiddin'!" giggles Okay, maybe a more intelligent comment next time? Who knows? And hopefully Ficwad would stop being an "asstrick" to me. Hehe. I love using new vocabulary. LMAO.Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) WHOxIxAMxTHISxWEEK 2007-05-13
le sigh.
This story is the love of my life!
Please, please, pretty please update soon.
:)Broken Down On Memory Lane
(#) GwenMerlon 2007-05-31
Ok, so aparently I already rated this, but just didn't review... Because I'm a loser like that... OR if I HAVE already reviewed this chapter and just don't remember it then too bad. I'm too frustrated with Ficwad to chance going back now to see if I have or not... then I'd probably get kicked off or something as equally tragic in my puny little brain...
Soooo... This chapter was amazing as always. I'm sure you get so sick of hearing me say that, but it was. I loved how Kate is eating just about everything in sight. Bar-b-que sauce is amazing, and I definately admire her a lot more now that I realize that it's one of her pregnant foods. :)
And Joe!!! Way to be a big boy! I definately didn't see that coming. He switched from tom cruise dancing to serious/calm speaker super fast. I was all like, Yay! GO Joe!!! And the face that they both KNOW that it's Patrick's and not Joes, but they can't really do anything about it... THATS why Patrick won't get his chance... sigh
And I really laughed out loud at Pete thinking that Patrick might be dead somewhere in his apartment because Sister Hazel was playing on repeat... like that could convince someone of suicide or something.
I loved how Kate 'put on her big girl pants' and that's probably one of my favorite lines. Seriously. I can just imagine it. I think I'm going to use it in real life at some point in my future... don't worry, I'll be careful to cite your work appropriately. BUT OMG!!! PATRICK'S ADMISSION!!! At first I did the little 'gasp' thing after what he said about wishing she had just died. But you totally fixed that! It was so full of emotion and still so believable. I just wanted them to, you know, jump eachother or something.
Well, twas amazing as always!!!! (See, I knew you'd be hearing that soon!) Love it, and onward to review the next chapter I have so carelessly forgotten to review!
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