(#) danceislife 2007-04-30car crash? saw it coming. sorry, cliche.
but that doesn't keep me from LOVING IT! wait, that's morbid. who likes car crashes? minus junk yards?
Author's responsewell, there has to be a little cliche in every story...right?
Actually, I was playing this video game on XBox this weekend where you actually try to cause car crashes...it was the fucking bomb. And they had great bands on there like FOB, TAI, and AAR. I was hooked. Now that's morbid.
(#) AmericanBaby24 2007-04-30oh my god, what a cliffhanger! how could you do that to us?! lol.
i just read the two most recent chapters at once... they are both amazing, as usual... =)
"i looked at my sprite wanting it to reveal all the answers, it just fizzed." that line actually made me laugh out loud. =) i love you for writing this story! can't wait to see what happens next! and i'm anxiously awaiting another izzy-pete confrontation... ;)
Author's responseThanks for the amazing review. I usually stare into my beverage of choice waiting for an answer, but alas, it never responds.
(#) whatkatydid 2007-05-01Oh I cannot believe this. I chewed my lip so hard as I was reading this, I felt sick with Izzy, on another note, I'm not letting that nausea of hers go unoticed!
You know what we were talking about that time about just laying the drama out and writing it - I envy how you do it. I feel I can't do it, which is why I always employ you, which is why you're in DoJ , which is why I own all of you bitches!
Author's responseOh Katy! I love your reviews! You know you can totally lay the drama out on the table. I've seen you do it with out my help plenty of times. Sometimes you just need a little persuasion. And I totally am your bitch and not afraid to admit it!
- You know, I just read your other reviews. And I have to disagree with one point.
Just because something happens frequently, doesn't make it a cliche. Car crashes as a phenomenon are not a cliche. I think we have an understanding problem with the word. I was a little put out on your behalf by that comment. Anyway.
What iit is? Is complete drama-rama. How appropraite!
I love how everthing just keeps getting more and more complicated. It was heart-breakingly sweet how Patrick just took Izzy's rejection by being so, well, PATRICK.
And I've said it before and I'll say it again. Damn you Pete Wentz. Get outta that girls head.
This is super dramatic stuff. I would love to suggest drama-rama as a rating, especially for you. xxxxxxxxx
Author's responseI'm sorry that you felt a little put out by that comment, and I thank you for your support. I guess I wasn't really expecting that response, but to each their own. The car accident is actually a crucial point in this story and I didn't have any other way to write it. Also, I drive about 100+ miles a day, so I see car accidents about five times a week....no joke, so it is actually very common and not cliche in my head. And yes, Patrick will always be PATRICK. Thanks for the lovely review....it really made my evening. Smooches!
- You filthy minx! How could you do that to me?!?!? Not only did you critically injure Izzy, you sucked her back into that tragically sexy love triangle. That girl needs to make up her mind. OK, rant over. Now, I love how you portray Patrick. He's so loyal and sweet. And JB...well, he wasn't really in this chapter, but rawr. Pete is psychotic as usual. Love it. But I'm a little concerned with Izzy sickness. Might there be...a metaphoric bun in the metaphoric oven? OK, don't answer that! Let me simmer in anticipation. Again, I love the DoJ cameos in this one. Even as I was reading, I could hear Katy's accent dripping from the letters. Crystal was her sarcastic little self too. Awesomeness. Points and smooches for you.
Author's responseYou pay attention very well, young one. I admire that in you. Of course I sucked Izzy back into the sexy love triangle. Why wouldn't I do that...it's just so sexy! Spanks...I mean thanks for the points and smooches. Right back at 'cha!
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