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• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) patricksgirl84 2007-05-19

  Very sad!!! I wanted them to get back together and have the baby. :( But it was very good.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) whatkatydid 2007-05-20

  Alex! Freakin baby moses in the basket in the nile - I cannot believe this! I'm sad in every way possible but absolutely respect you that you did this and you wrote perfectly.
  
  I really don't know what else to say except you're amazing and you addressed this chapter with maturity, style and honesty.
  
  Wopping great kiss on your ass from me - AIM soon? xxxx

  Author's response

  spank you - haha ass kiss, spank you get it?! ok sorry i know i'm the biggest dork of life.
  but thank you so much for your words of kindness and amazingness, it killed me to write this chapter and was so unsure at how it came out but you made me feel so much better about it.
  thank you so much for always reviewing.
  AIM most definitely.
  :)
  
  xxo

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) Melim 2007-05-20

  Damn Alex, there are no words. That was amazing. Everything was soo good and dramatic and emotional. Reading that email, I was expecting something bad, but this came out really refreshing. Even though we planned all out of this out, I never expected it to come out like this. Damn you for making me emotionally attached to your characters. And so the story now begins...
  
  And Mussolini came out acting more like Sebastian than himself, just fyi.

  Author's response

  seriously i was awake at three in the morning hating this chapter because i wasn't sure about the last sentence. but i guess it turned out ok.
  and hey i combined both the fish, Sebastian's characteristics with Mussolini's name - so yay me. lol.
  it makes me happy that you are now emotionally attached to my characters, lol
  it makes me smile like this -> :D
  
  and yes,
  now is really when the story begins
  
  xxo.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) watch_the_sky 2007-05-20

  im so emotionally attached to these characters and this (these) story(ies) that it hurts. this was amazing, when i read the summary i was so nervous to see what was going to happen, but i must admit that even though i teared up and it was horribly sad for her to lose the baby, you wrote it so perfectly that it just all seems to fit so well. i cant wait to see what you're plan is, you are amazing. points for you, end of rambling review =D

  Author's response

  Thank you so much!!!
  It really means alot to hear you say that - it pretty much made my day.
  
  xxo.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) danceislife 2007-05-20

  NOOOO!!!!
  
  Killing babies off....sounds familiar...

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) fobgal1 2007-05-20

  Wahhhhhh!
  NOOOOOOO!
  She lost the baby.
  That wasn't supposed to happen.
  Poor Kate.
  Please update soon.
  p.s.-this chapter made me cry.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) Gangsta_Girl 2007-05-23

  If I wasn't in a public computer lab, I'd be bawling my eyes out right now. I was hoping that it wouldn't be but as soon as I started reading the part where she had to go to the bathroom, I knew... Ugh. This is so sad. I think I need a Patrick hug. sigh But besides the drama, this was amazing. I love you for updating. You rock my little world.

• Broken Down On Memory Lane

  (#) GwenMerlon 2007-05-31

  Wow.
  
  Again, I am completely blown away by you writing. Seriously, you have a tallent that is rarely ever reached by most. This chapter had it all- it was funny at the begining and completely hear-wrenching at the end. Your work with emotions and conveying how your characters feel is soooooo real. I completely believe that they are true people and not just characters. I could just imagine the end- where everything is just chaos at the hospital; Patrick wanting to get in but unable and not really understanding why on earth they are treating him this way; Kate's final reaction to Joe and the tearful 'thank you' whine eventually admitting to Patrick that it was his; Pete and Sara's attempt to protect Kate, and getting upset because they are hurting another friend while doing so. It was amazing.
  
  I really have a lot of funnier things to say about the begining of the chapter but they all feel very inappropriate at this moment where I am feeling so emotionally drained. But you are seriosuly fantastic! Take my points! I give them to you!!!

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