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Fun With Tasers
1 reviewThe good news: Emal is taking the rescued prisoner home for a reward. The bad news: Said prisoner was not a cute girl in a ripped costume.
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Deconstruction
(#) armourdude 2006-03-09
This chapter seems a little forced. The site gags are ok but not all that funny yet. The tazer thing got old right away. I think an occasional threat to use it may have been funnier if placed in the right context. But you did leave a bit a mystery with the fire thing. Now to find out what is so special with this kid.
On a positive note, you have done well to leave behind the rigidity of what you think should be expected to be more in the way of what some people will act.
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