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An Arch-Nemesis Is Born
5 reviewsCharley finds her arch-nemesis and discovers a terrifying secret that the walls of Wal-Mart have been harboring. It involves blue pens.
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(#) ssketchator 2007-07-09
I think I've just found my arch-nemesis.
My dream in life is to have an arch-nemesis. Also, I love the word nemesis.
And Charley. I love how she thinks, how she acts, how she speaks, and how she falls asleep in her car at the WalMart. I did that once.
Do you talk like this in real life? If so, you are my idol.Author's response
Having an arch-nemesis is fun. This whole business with the person who parks in non-parking spaces is based on my own real life experience. It drives me nuts. And yes, I do think like this and talk like this. When I am allowed to talk.
Charley xxxDiscrepancy
(#) killxsmile 2007-07-11
i'm in love with your writing style. seriously.Author's response
Thanks. I am so critical about the way I write. I'm convinced that my writing is bad. I'm so glad you proved me wrong. ^-^
Charley xxxDiscrepancy
(#) xxACoalminexx 2007-07-16
I really love the way you write! Oh and in the first chapter, you said "pyjamas". Well, isn't it spelled PAJAMAS? I maybe wrong...and I may sound like a weirdo but I couldn't help noticing.Author's response
"Pyjamas" is the British way (I'm Canadian but I've lived in Britain for the most part of my life) and "Pajamas" is the American way. Oh and thanks for the compliment ^-^
Charley xxxDiscrepancy
(#) XXPoeticTragedyXX 2007-07-19
lol. Your aremy HERO! I love the way you write, it's like im reading my own words. I never though anyone else knew about the pen conspiracy...and i'm still searching for me Arch Nemesis.
It's true. Your writing is gold.Author's response
The pen conspiracy! Yes! Someone else sees the big picture! Thank you. And I'm glad that I'm your hero and all but my mom says to tell you, "Find a new hero, my daughter is a bad influence." Psssh, she is just freaked out 'cause I want to be Patrick Stumph for Halloween.
Charley xxx
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