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• Tales of A Torn Up Teenager

  (#) hollefine 2007-08-19

  First off: I love you.
  
  Okay, now that I've got that outta my system...I just love you're language - especially this part; "She looked like a balloon, ready to pop." In fact, the first part of this chapter is just amazing. I really like how Kaddie meets Ryan - it's realistic and sweet.
  
  Okay, that's it for now...I'll keep on reviewing if you keep on updating! ;]
  
  

  Author's response

  oh my gosh, thanks :]
  yeah, that who beginning i ended up rewiting like, 6 times. I really wasn't sure of the outcome.
  
  but, thanks a lot, im glad you liked it :]

• Tales of A Torn Up Teenager

  (#) simplewriter007 2007-08-20

  beth-e! I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTIONN! and its even better since you rewrote it! i dont see how anybody CANT fall in love with this story! :]

• Tales of A Torn Up Teenager

  (#) simplewriter007 2007-08-20

  beth-e! I LOVE YOUR DESCRIPTIONN! and its even better since you rewrote it! i dont see how anybody CANT fall in love with this story! :]

• Tales of A Torn Up Teenager

  (#) medicatedlives 2007-08-20

  I was sooo right about the Ryan thing!
  
  But I have to say again that this is really well written.
  
  I'm review #3 so that means new chapter, right?

  Author's response

  gold star for you :]
  and yes, there will be an update sometime, lets say.. tonight or tomorrow, because I'm currently in the process of editing all my stuff.
  
  but, im glad you like it :]

• Tales of A Torn Up Teenager

  (#) x_vampire_angel_x 2007-08-20

  wow. this is actually amazing.
  
  if it was a guy i would want to his kids (btw thats a good thing....)
  
  but seriously, keep up the good work
  
  x c x

  Author's response

  uhmm, thank you?
  haha

• Tales of A Torn Up Teenager

  (#) KoKoaPuffsAtTheDisco 2007-08-26

  This is good!
  I can't wait for more!!
  
  And your flash back was great!

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