(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-03-20i have just realised that if you don't review and rate the whole story it doesn't get the author out of zero mode with the story title. i review and rate chapters but that doesn't count in whether your whole story is reviewed and rated.
yes i get there eventually!!
so what can i say about this story??
- hi i have only recently become a member of ficward. I solely became a member inorder to coment on stories i have come across through thus website. I indeed have keep tabs on your story since mid Decemeber 2007. The way you have incapulsated the character of modern day filial corruption is amazing. I really enjoy reading them and dread the " author's note" which 99% of times means you are going to post a chapter for x amount of day. Your story id amazing and very entertaining and hope that gerard and monica get back together lol. Although im not a fan of my chemical romance ( im more of an Escape the fate, lamb of god, Marlyin Manson type girl) i really enjoy the story line. Keep up ur excellent chapter and cannot wait for tomorows post
(#) billparsons 2008-06-19This story started off so well and you are a good writer. But I am disappointed by how what was once a fresh and different approach to "Gerard," quickly turned into the typical "Gerard is a horrible fuck up."
The halo over Monica's head becomes tiresome at best. She isn't a very likeable character, she isn't very real, in many ways she uses Gerard as much as Liv did. It is difficult to warm up to Kara or show any interest in the storyline involving her and Bob. Kelly and Luke - very well written, age appropriate and interesting. I can't see Mikey as much of a wimp as he is written.
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