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• you can keep my brother

  (#) hopeanne 2007-12-30

  Oh this chapter made me go mmmmm.
  I dont know if thats good or bad though.
  Its funny how like they decide to call each other on the same day! That shows how close they still are. You know great minds think alike and all that shit.
  I dont think hes married to liz. Imean he could be but I dont think he is. In fact that may have been why he was calling her cause he saw it too. But I dont know.
  I loved her attitude at the beginning. It was just what I expected of Skylar. And I loved how she was soooo frustrated that she couldnt even think of witty insults. Shows how run down she really is.
  And the whole option C bit was great. I bet Billy never mentioned to her she has an option C. I think youre trying to make me not like Billy anymore, and its getting hard to stand by him. I mean I get hes trying to protect her, but shes not a child. She can make her own decisions. Why would he decide she cant talk to Gerard? That sorta pissed me off. I understand his reasonings but if hes trying to help Sky stand on her own then he has to let go. bah
  this is going in th ewrogn direction. I told you I take shit personally.
  Sky should be mad that he decided that she cant talk to him. I would be if I was her. But of course shes not gonna come right out and say it. No shes gonna hold this silent grudge against billy let it build and then snap at him cause shes afraid to tell him shit now. Cause if she does she will be all alone and that sucks.
  Theres just so many conflicting emotions here. I am glad that Ali snapped some sense into her cause Skys whining was getting patethic. It was a big downer. So Im glad someone told her that, but at the same time Im still poor sky.
  Shes gotta talk to Gee or even Mikey or Frankie. She cant keep hiding.
  Im so torn. I dont know what direction youre gonna take this. I mean she can be all self pitying and wallowing over him being 'married' or she can bitchy and angry and its just a toss up.
  But I do know, from what we know of SKy shes gonna do something foolish if given the opportunity. Like with the tattoo. She tends to make impulsive decisions based on what ever emotion is consuming her.
  
  And robxmcr or whatever the fuck his name is says he supports Billy. That "sky" is crazy. And if she gets mad then shes being ungrateful. (oh he did not just say that) That shes being ungrateful of his support and when shes ready hes sure Billy will let her go. bah. (the bah is from me)

  Author's response

  I really don't mind your strong affection for Billy but because it's like her pov so she might be pulling it in one direction...You know the drill, she only knows what people want her to know so Billy might be completely different from what everyone thought cause we don't know what goes through his mind.
  Gah! did I make like any sense at all? Just a tiny bit? My head isn't working. So I dunno if I covered everything I wanted.
  
  Oh RobXmcr:....

• you can keep my brother

  (#) _cranium_ 2007-12-30

  ohhh what a chapter!
  if she's too scared or whatever to call gerard now, she should atleast call mikey, or even better, frank. just to ask what's going on so she doesn't have to spend another few weeks thinking about gerard's and liz's possible marriage.
  and even if she hadn't seen the ring and the article, she still should call the guys. that would probably be frank cause he was on 'sky's side' and i doubt skyler would call mikey or bob or ray. why can't she call frank? i miss hearing from the guys. she should miss them too! oh well maybe she's concentrating on missing the hell out of gerard but what about the other boys.. you'd think she'd be sad about how her and mikey's friendship got pretty much fucked up... wait, why hasn't alessa called her? she said she would. but then again, she didn't answer a single call during the 'smelly weeks'... meh i don't know.
  gosshhh she is so bad at communicating. she really is. i know it's been said so many times. but it's true :D
  
  i'm glad Ali snapped at her too. i gotta admit it was sort of harsh but atleast she got the point. oh did she? maybe she didn't get the point, she never gets it. when she fought with gerard, she'd never really think about the things he said afterwards. she'd just focus on being mad at him. and now she's got sometihng else on her mind. first the option C, then the whole gerard and liz thing. i don't think they're married though, well atleast i hope they aren't. but seriously, the same ring? no way. they're not married.
  
  
  
  please don't say they're married?
  
  yep, i know. i'm gonna have to wait and see..
  
  thank you for being such a great updater haha, i always look forward to reading the new chap.

  Author's response

  Aw fuck ficwad! My respond to you didn't show up!!!
  I'm sorry but I don't remember what I wrote...Something about her talking to the Olsen camp aka Bob and Frankie, just not as often as they used too cause there are some topics they can't discuss like Gerard...and Gerard.
  I skip over a lot of things in the story, mentioning them occasionally later, so I hope whatever sounds weird now, will be cleared later.

• you can keep my brother

  (#) winnie_55 2007-12-31

  I still feel bad for Sky, even though she totally brought it on herself by dumping him and then not talking to him.
  It's like watching your best friend being broken hearted (ok, so Im way too obsessed with this story now!)
  But I have to say I am kinda glad Ali snapped and told her all that stuff, I just wish someone there had made her call him, the whole marriage thing could just be maade up shit and she should have rung him and listened to what really happened.
  I really hope he didn't marry Liz, that would be off the scale stupid, even by Sky's standards!
  Maybe he was wearing the ring like to prove to Sky that he still loves her? Please tell me he didn't get married!
  Also, I think it's really cool that even though none of the band has been in the story for a while, it's still fantastic. Like it may be a My Chem fan fiction, but it's so much more than that. All the characters you have created are so believable and the plot is so amazing.

  Author's response

  Oh thank you!!! I just don't know what else to say but thank you! I'm really flattered!
  I didn't really realize having no one from the band for a lot of chapters can really turn people off but you know even when your loved ones aren't the guys from MCR they aren't constantly in your life in every chapter so to speak...

• you can keep my brother

  (#) cutegirl12356 2007-12-31

  I love it....Can't wait for more!

  Author's response

  Well brace yourself cause here comes another one!! Heheh thanks for the review!

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