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When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) GreyShadow 2008-01-20
a crucio to the nut's..............................
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. damn!When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) banner 2008-01-20
I think Lucius should have given Draco the message in person, but the Brotherhood probably ordered him to be gone by dawn, or something like that. I suspect that Lucius and Narcissa would be smart to shift Draco over to Durmstrang - it isn't as if any resentment wouldn't spill over to their son, even if he WASN'T complicit.
Too bad about Ginny, but I never really cared about her anyway. Bringing Ginny back to Hogwarts probably won't be very good for her, but it's exactly the sort of thing the Headmaster would insist upon. He would probably use phrases like,"facing your problems," "being comforted by familiar surroundings," and (my favorite) "safest place in England." She'll need therapy, quite probably extensive Mind Healing, and I'm sure she won't get it.
I wonder whether this will bring the Weasley family together or help rip it apart?Author's response
Considering Lucius had a Crucio to the privates, and perhaps a bit of additional, worse torture, he was in no condition to walk without a charmed icepack let alone visit Draco.
While Draco could transfer (but he won't, as he's always a useful tool to have in a story, where could Ginny tranfer to? The Weasleys could hardly afford getting her the magical language training she would need to go to a foreign school, and Rowling is very firm there are no other schools in Britain.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) vl100butch 2008-01-20
I just wish that Lucy had received the full treatment....although from what we know about Scorpion....I wouldn't want to be on the receiving end....
Going to be interesting to see what you have planned for Ginny and the Malfoy's....
When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Wolfric 2008-01-20
I agree with some of the other reviewers, it seems to me more likely that Harry's mentors would have simply killed Lucius and washed their hands of him. Perhaps they wanted to set a different example for Harry? Do you think the cruciatus curse hurts more when applied to the testes? It is sort of uncomfortable to contemplate. Thanks for writing. W.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Anaknisatanas 2008-01-21
I'm glad Lucius got a dose of pain. He deserved it. As for Ginny, if she is resorted will she go to Slytherin? And will Draco return to Hogwarts for third year or will we not see him anymore? I look forward to your next update.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Anaknisatanas 2008-01-21
I'm glad Lucius got a dose of pain. He deserved it. As for Ginny, if she is resorted will she go to Slytherin? And will Draco return to Hogwarts for third year or will we not see him anymore? I look forward to your next update.When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Coolone007 2008-01-21
Even though Ginny has never been one of my favorite charaters does not mean I want her to die. I can't wait to read more!When Vernon Didn't Miss
(#) Clell65619 2008-01-22
- I'd never thought of the Crucio as being directional and selective, I always thought of it as a full body owie. That's mean.
- Good Chapter, looking forward to the rest of the story.Author's response
Yes, a full-body 'owie', but some parts hurts more than others
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(#) tricorvus 2011-09-10
Again the best lines taken already... Look it's damn good stuff, and I really love what you're doing to the Malfoy's. :D
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