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The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Riven 2008-02-06
I too have been eagerly awaiting the next chapter, and have recieved an aleart again. i dont know if you did upload one and it just isnt showing up or if it is mistakenly thinking you did but either way im not blameing you, but like fenris said maby you can rattle a cage a little harder than we can.Author's response
- My apologies to everyone that got an update alert. I had a grammatical error pointed out and I corrected it without realizing that doing so would sent out update alerts. Won't be doing that anymore. Sorry for the inconvenience. I'll be repeating this to everyone who asked about the update, because I don't know if these responses are emailed or not...The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) slayersfan01 2008-02-06
I think the reason why we keep getting email alerts but there is no new chapter is because you changed something in the last chapter. I noticed that you edited one sentence. Even though it is just one tiny thing the site for some reason sends out an email alert. I've noticed that happens with other fics as well so it is not your fault.Author's response
- My apologies to everyone that got an update alert. I had a grammatical error pointed out and I corrected it without realizing that doing so would sent out update alerts. Won't be doing that anymore. Sorry for the inconvenience. I'll be repeating this to everyone who asked about the update, because I don't know if these responses are emailed or not...The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) banner 2008-02-06
I know I've reviewed this story before, but it doesn't seem to be taking.
I just wanted to say, I've been in the mood for a good revenge!Harry story for a while. Thanks for this - I like it when our hero is sane and savvy.
It's an interesting psychological profile of Dumbledore. He's so used to certain ways of thinking, he simply can't adjust his responses. Even when his usual methods are blatantly failing, he simply can't think of another approach...Author's response
- Yeah, a couple of times at least.
- He's got Hermione and Daphne to keep him sane.
- Tom and Albus are interchangeable, either could play either role...The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2008-02-07
I actually quite enjoy this story alot and I can tell you that had this happened or that happened, canon might have fallen in this path, however it was a story initially geared for children and that is why it wasn't quite so great. I think that, in part, is why we have so many stories in the fan fiction world now. Your story is exciting and it's not quite the train-wreck as some of the other, bad things consistently happen to Harry stories. Here's the problem I see that you have. You, like me, have far too many oars in the water. This is a story that I would urge you to place a priority in and start cranking it out as I enjoy it more than the others. That being said, I would hope that you do a little more with the two "youngest" Weasleys. There is always room for an attack on St. Mungo's Hospital, and perhaps, either, a branding of the two, or some more wickedness coming from them. I know that I've got some in store for my two in Hell, but that's my story, not yours. Please update soon.
Geovanni Luciano
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