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The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) Terdwilicker 2008-02-08
4 days after the update notice, we finally get to read it. Satisfying. Snape with a broken pelvis in his duel. Luna becoming a woman in her strangely logical way, still acting like a seer.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) wolff 2008-02-08
Score! I love to see Snape (and often Dumbles) get what's coming to them. It does my heart good to see the slime get what they deserve.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) ChiVayne 2008-02-08
Excellent retribution there. Too bad more of them didn't resist arrest. As for Dumbledore, if there was a way to bind or remove his magic, I would have the authorities do that and then put him in a muggle mental hospital as he's obviously insane - he thinks he's a wizard. The best revenge against him is him seeing all of his plans fail. And at his age, without his magic to sustain him, he would probably go on to "the next great adventure" soon enough.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) jmcqk6 2008-02-15
oh hell yeah!
Filius and Snape. I love it. I do hope you continue this story soon!The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) morriganscrow 2008-02-20
Wonderful chapter!
I loved your take on Flitwick and the way he dealt with Snape - professional, vicious and precise.
Justin/Luna isn't a pairing I've seen before, but it works well.
Keep up the great work.Author's response
- Thank you.
- I'm not sure if it's a Fanon conceit that he's a former Professional Dueler or not, but it seemed to me that the jolly man from the charms classroom scenes of the books had to have a darker side.
- I needed someone for Luna, and I've never seen anyone use Justin before. Why shouldn't he be the lucky one?The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) maddsloth 2008-03-04
Your story is Great, I am looking forward to the next update. I Can’t wait to see Dumbledore and Molly go down. One question though nev had 3 blocks on his magic, did Harry only have 1 block on his or more? But I guess nev was blocked almost to the point of being a squib while Harry was still in the top of the class so… anyhow like I said great story thanks for writing it.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) daled73 2008-03-07
Hi,
In case you care, I have posted a few snippets of this story on the "Best Line Ever" Thread over at "the Restricted Section" BBS.
It is a form of Rec'ing that usually gets folks to read the source, and there is a shortcut to this story posted there too.
Hope this meets with your approval.
D.Author's response
- Thanks, Appreciate it.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) issabissa 2008-04-08
Wow!!! I have to say that I just LOVE this story. I stumbled on to it this morning and have not been able to put it down! A very interesting and unique twist on things!! Keep up the fabulous work!!! I have throughly enjoyed every word of it!Author's response
- Thank you.The Acts Of Betrayal
(#) dogbertcarroll 2008-04-17
I loved how Snape was taken down. Pity it was over so fast.Author's response
It pretty much had to be... Snape was a little boy playing in grown men's games. For Filius to prolong it would have been cruel.
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