- Poor Dumbles, coming out of the influence of a potion, perhaps, and still screwing up. As for 'Them', when 'They' are all gone, harry will have an easier time reforming things.
Author's responseHopefully, yes. The Them is mostly a symptom, though.
Dumbles have been under for quite some time with judgement-altering potions. The cumulative effects will be amusing, i hope.
(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-02-13This chapter wound up being very interesting. I was a little worried because at the beginning, Dumbledore seemed to suddenly become completely sane, but by the time Nott was to be taken to the Ministry he was back to form.
Looking forward to more.
Author's responseThanks. Dumbledore is sane. For a given value, of course. He just doesn't have any working sense of, well, sense.
- Yay, a new chapter! Glad to see that you've recovered from the Crash. This was an excellent plot movement chapter. Methinks if 'They' are not careful 'Their' wives and daughters will be lost in the physical and not just the metaphorical sense. To Harry go the spoils, after all. Hrm, guess Freya knew what she was doing when she named her price, because Harry is going to have to do some serious population growth.
The Them is a bit more of a realistic foe that a big, bad Dark Lord. Unfortunately, they're up against a completely unrealistic enemy. :)
Magical Britain will expand, and the smarter members of the Wizengamot will not just bow to even the Them. Stay tuned. Next chapter will be mostly smut, though.
- Yes we have vanir in a triumphant comeback with a great chapter. Well albus has no excuse now the potion has worn off but he is still unwilling to do what is needed to win this war or even help. And I can't beleive you had me feeling sorry for dumbles at the begenning of the chapter. And as for hermione she is definately harrys' girl and speaking of harrys' girls are we going to get some background on lavender now that she has had time to calm down. And I guess that harry just has an abundance of enemies or as I would like to call them minor inconviences to get rid of. But what I really wanted to know is what did remus get hired, who is going to take over for snape, when is professor sinistra going to get some of harry, and what is going on with the weasleys and the dursleys we havent herd from them in a while. and I hope that you use the pleasure vortex I described in my last review as a reward for his girls. P.S. it's good to have you back.
Well, Unca Albie may be off the potion, but there is such a thing as cumulative effects. Quite frankly, there's nothing he can do at this time, and he is a sorry figure, the way i write him. My Hermione has made up her mind, andshe might just tattoo "Harry's property" on her forehead. The Lavender-bunny grew into a big-assed bison. There will be more of her in time. And of her business-partners, as well.
Remus is re-hired, McGonagall is lobbying to get Sigyn for potions and Sinistra is plotting right now. She'll be in the next chapter. Maybe not all the way, but she'll be there. The Weasley family isn't really in this fic, because i know my limits, and Molly is a bit beyond them. The Dursley's are currently in an area called Purgatorio, and it's doubtful that they'll ever leave. Dud should have known better, really.
You have had many good ideas, and some of them, including that, will surely appear sooner or later.
- Nice way to deal with Nott, wonder how the public reacted to Dumbles basically killing him, assuming he died.
That part was left in the air.
But overall, well done, and nice intro for the not-so-secret society.
The public debate hasn't moved that far yet. I'm saving up for a major outrage.
He died. I actually forgot to write it in, but it takes just a few seconds, like six, to bleed out completely from something like that. The thigh arteries also have a habit of sucking air in when severed completely.
(#) iamspammer 2008-02-14You took long time to update and I was afraid you abandoned the story. Thank Merlin you din't.
Yeah, Dumbledore seemed the sorry figure but then became directly responsible for killing Nott. Though at that point story seemed rushed and I had to read to twice to understand what was going on.
Harr is in castle. Is it term end or Harry has left the castle? A bit confusing so not sure.
So all bad guys are together to defeat Harry eh? I hope that you don't plan to kill anyone Harry loves. He's had enough of that.
I think it's time that Harry slowly takes over ministry from inside. He may be independent but I think ministry still listens (sheeple) to ministry. So, maybe a foothold in the stronger points in ministry? Like Harry's people as heads and so on? it's totally political and shouldn't be ignored. Just MY thoughts.
Please update soon. Smut and 5000 words? YAY.
I like smut but was glad that you decided on a chapter without smut (no consecutive chapters though. please). It was interesting change.
What do you plan to do about Dumbledore? Oh and how about girls in OTHER houses? I mean Harry now has a stronghold in Gryffin and Slytherin but what about other houses (even though Luna and Susan are there). Just wondering.
Author's responseEnd of term? It's a weekend. I wrote it pretty clearly, i think. The death of Nott was brief, because that was sort of the point. Dumbles can't make snap decisions anymore.
If i mix more girls in at this point, i won't have a chance of keeping it all straight. There are too many as it is. Perhaps the Them can help me with that...
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