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• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Cateagle 2008-02-14

  Hmm, 'twould see that Dumbles is either still a bit befuddled, despite coming out from the effects of those potions (good and bad days as it were), or he's still too overconfident; in either case, he gave a new meaning to "forget-me-Nott". I wonder who's going to catch more outrage, Albus or Kilchurn?
  
  I loved the healing sequences in the hospital and I have to wonder at Poppy's reaction to those nurses' "uniforms". Then again, given Seamus' reaction, I'm sure the Huldr gals enjoyed themselves.
  
  I liked the "calming down" approach that Gabrielle used with Lavender; I suspect Lavender is about to become another Kilchurn regular, along with Hermione, Ginny, et al. I loved where Freya started teaching Luna; if she decides to bring Luna to her the way Harry came to her, that should be quite the interesting time for all.

  Author's response

  Yup. Fumbledore is not quite recuperated yet. Slightly judgement-impaired, perhaps? He's going to take some heat for that, i guess.
  
  My impression of Poppy from the books is a woman who cares for her students, but takes things in stride as long as they don't jeopardize the students, and this bunch surely didn't. Seamus had a dream come true. Poor bloke.
  
  Gabrielle has a simplistic view of personal problems. It works, though. Lavender will be back in the upcoming chapters.
  Freja does have a brother who surely wouldn't mind boinking a self-proclaimed Goddess. The "trials" will be mentioned later.
  
  Thanks
  Vanir

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Vanir 2008-02-14

  Yup. Fumbledore is not quite recuperated yet. Slightly judgement-impaired, perhaps? He's going to take some heat for that, i guess.
  
  My impression of Poppy from the books is a woman who cares for her students, but takes things in stride as long as they don't jeopardize the students, and this bunch surely didn't. Seamus had a dream come true. Poor bloke.
  
  Gabrielle has a simplistic view of personal problems. It works, though. Lavender will be back in the upcoming chapters.
  Freja does have a brother who surely wouldn't mind boinking a self-proclaimed Goddess. The "trials" will be mentioned later.
  
  Thanks
  Vanir

  Author's response

  This may be the oddest double-post I've ever made. I think I'll keep it as a warning example to myself...
  
  Vanir (again)

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) drifter 2008-02-14

  Skin is nice; and people enjoying themselves even better. Complements to the chef.
  
  That said, I am enjoying your story a lot.
  
  You must have a plot line, cause all new lines appear with at appropriate time. All plots , main, and small interior, fit and make sense. You even have convoluted ones (my favorite) but their understandable.
  
  You have introduced many things, always with proper explanation and closed them off neatly (ie: bike race, Goddesses and Gods, and much more).
  
  Definitely an enjoyable read. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
  
  
  May the MUSE be with you!!!
  

  Author's response

  Thanks.
  Reviews like this makes me blush and feel much smarter than i am. Some string the sub-plots along like beads on a thread. I prefer the braid-like structure, where there's always at least three going at different paces, leading the main one along. Except for that basic idea, i just write the pieces that has to go where i put them. Simple, really.
  
  Erm. I must have read thousands of fanfics, and not one have ended where this one will end. Stay tuned.
  
  Vanir

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) ToddGilliss 2008-02-20

  Again, on with the show.
  
  The numbering no the chapters are a little displaced, website error?
  
  Looking forward to repair of both Ron and Dumbledore in the future.
  
  Also, where is Hagrid? There was a natural affinity between him and Harry.
  
  I await your, and my, pleasure with the next chapters!!!

  Author's response

  As i said i the disclaimer of this chapter, i have nothing to do with the numbering. I have considered taking the story down, and re-up it all, to get it working, but then, I'd lose all my reviews. I'd hate that.
  
  I have more or less moved Ron to a secondary novel-length fic, yet to be upped. Perhaps i will bring him back, though.
  
  Hagrid is my ongoing guilty conscience. He really belongs in this fic. Hell, he can actually get laid in this story, but i just can't write him. My English is not good enough to be that bad.
  
  I'll give it a shot, though.
  
  Vanir

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) michae1ange1o 2008-02-21

  I love this story, definately one of those rare ones that shows an true interest and good knowledge in history&legend. I especialy like the way you weave the Arthurian legends with the Nordic and strike a good ballance. A+

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) cj_cold 2008-02-23

  Realized I never reviewed this chapter.
  
  Nice chapter.
  
  Found it interesting that Malfoy smuggled in a gun with silver bullets the year they had a werewolf on staff.
  
  Rather liked Nott's fate. Should really strengthen the new Slytherin position to see one of the Old Guard go down in such a humiliating way.
  
  More soon please.

  Author's response

  snort
  I did miss it, actually.
  
  Thanks
  You're the first to make the connection, at least that i know of. Observant.
  
  Poor Nott. Killed by stupidity and arrogance, and it wasn't even his own. There's been some serious changes in Slytherin. The new ruler is a self-proclaimed slave. How's that for a difference? More on that in the next chapter.
  
  Vanir

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-04-02

  Very good chapter.
  
  gunny

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) kyzhart 2008-07-20

  I loved last chapters Lavender action. Depiliation charm and make up panda...tee hee. You painted a very hilarious and vibrant picture.

  Author's response

  Thanks. I do try. Painting those pictures is my favourite thing in the whole authoring gig, second only to people actually noticing them.
  
  Vanir

• Harry Potter and the Midnight Sun.

  (#) Dragen 2008-07-23

  Another great chapter mate, loving the story and can't wait to read more and see what is going to happen next.
  
  I see that Dumbledore wasn't in his right mind when he sent Harry to the Dursleys - no der there mate.
  
  I like how Parvati and Hermione handled healing Harry.
  
  Could you email me and explain about Luna being a Goddess, I still don't understand that.

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