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The Outing
33 reviewsHarry and Daphne's 2nd Date part one. Tracey and Hermione worry, Neville tells them off.
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Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) morriganscrow 2008-03-08
Very, very nice!
You write Harry and Daphne really well, and the pace of their date is lovely and natural.
I do hope, as this fine story progresses, that you will reveal what happened with Remus and Ginny, as well as what will happen.
The joke on Fred and George was perfect, and if the Murtlap doesn't work, there's always Skelegrow!Author's response
- Thanks
- I'm amazed at how well they are meshing. It wasn't intentional, but there you go.Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) LabRat 2008-03-10
Shoe shopping on the first date? I thought he said he wasn't trying to get in her pants.
This is a prime example of how you can corrupt an open minded pureblood with muggle things. Though, I don't think he should have done Star Wars as the first film. I mean really, showing someone that is lie spoiling normal movies for them. Now the only place that he can go is the sequels, and something like Independence Day.
Ha, looks like Mr. Longbottom finally had his balls drop. Good on him.
Wonder what the next day will bring.Harry Potter and the Marriage Contracts
(#) ficbob 2008-04-01
Great date
Dinner, a movie and dancing is a classic for a reason
So, if Hermione is getting a clue what about Ginny?Author's response
- nope.
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