- Lmao i do have to agree with The Resident on all of his comments but i also have to say that this story is/ was coming along excellently i have been reading this since you published it but i never reviewed it before now because i wasnt all that into telling people what i thought but then people reviewed a coulpe of times on my stories on other sites and i realized the importance of reviewing. Uncle Buck has some good points but my personal opinion matches alot of these agreeing with grilling Remus and also there should be a decent rough patch for a while between the them because what he said to Harry and Hermione was really messed up especially since he was supposed to care for harry but then again he could have just been following orders to act like he cared for harry. i hope to see Harry meeting the Grangers in the next chapter and i hope you dont make the ending of Voldemort quick and easy i mean come on you have to admit that those are kinda cheesy fics where they have like one duel and harry whoops voldies ass i mean draw it out and make it "A KNOCK DOWN AND DRUG OUT FIGHT!" and then i think you will have an EXCELLENT story. make sure you keep the "Warlocks" in this story too make them a main part of it like say they've spent so much time around Harry/Mione that they begin to develop magic and such because i dont think The Potters would have happened if it werent for the "Warlocks". that is all for now i hope to see and update preferrably sooner than later though if at all possible...
- Very nice. The most enjoyable thing I've read in a while. The Harmony elements are well done. Any chance you might write up the reaction of Ron and Ginny? I'd love to see their heads explode in rage. Nice characterization of Bill and Fleur. I find Remus' duplicity intriguing, as I hadn't seen that before. Usually, he's either good, deluded, or outright evil. Another turncoat in the Marauders really makes me rethink that group dynamic and how much Dumbles really knew about the Marauders. Thus far, I really like the balance you have in Harry and Hermione's relationship. They both seem to contribute but in different ways. Thanks for the fun. Hope to see more in the future.
(#) Uncle_Buck 2010-06-02A new approach. I'd have Fleur's father come with a box that arrived by royal courier. Having seen Hermione's responce to the memory, a team of historians, review the memories and find another Snape memory where DD sends peter with snape to join LV. this should be viewed by all, this night. See what wolfies response is.
(#) Bob_Schroeck 2010-06-15It's been nearly two years since you last updated this story, and although I only just discovered it today, I'm already feeling like the others who've reviewed. Although you have some technical problems with your writing (run-on sentences, sentence fragments, occasional word choice errors, among other things), you have crafted an intriguing and absorbing plot, and I really want to see where it goes from here. Please consider picking this one back up and continuing.
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