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  (#) bmatsea 2008-06-29

  This is a great story. The H/HR interaction is wonderful. I do find it disconcerning about the Remus and the order. Looking forward to more. Please don't take so long between updates.
  
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  (#) Garnth 2008-06-29

  Beginning and settings looks interesting. Keep it this way and you will find enough readers.

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  (#) growlerlight 2008-07-30

  I am enjoying story a great deal please continue it

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  (#) loot 2008-08-30

  This is an excellent story, really looking forward to see where you take it. can't wait to see what happens when h/hr get back to the gang, and or the reaction of what happens when they meet back up with the order...at some point. with the amount of knowledge that they both have obtained...mastery+ in everything (and they shared their school knowledge with each other, I believe) should be interesting. I did not see charms listed in your list though, I wonder if that was just an oversight or something too look forward too. I mean hogwarts professors have to bee good at something and even with the amount of knowledge that they have, you have to figure that the professors are just as good or know more. would be interesting to see if h/hr get some of their knowledge, would be interesting to see flitwicks (sp) dueling and charm knowledge transfer...and if they share anything with anyone else...the reaction of the other teachers should be priceless.. So many different ways you could take this, can't wait to see what you do. till next time, and don't worry that other people haven't found this little gem yet. they will, its too good to pass up for long.

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  (#) Zucht 2008-09-13

  This is my favorite Harry/Hermione story ever. I can't wait for them to return to England... I imagine them meeting up with the Warlock's and Hermione talks to the Adeer snake - or when they stop by the granger's, just imagine the shock of seeing their now married and ohysically changed daughter - or Harry driving the motorcycle past the carrages at Hogwarts and showing up at the feaast with dragon hide school robes...
  
  I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story!!!!!!

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  (#) Isabeziers 2008-10-16

  I really like this story and I hope you're going to continue it :)

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  (#) The_Resident 2008-10-25

  An excellent story so far. The editing needs a little work, though. I am adding this story to my alerts and do hope you continue it to a satisfactory conclusion. I am a big fan of Harry with Hermione. In fact, a fan of Harry with almost any female except the fan obsessed Ginny. How JKR could have them married at the end of book seven... and the names of the children!?!?!?!?! That one boy's name is so wrong on multiple levels. Oh, well, that's why we have fanfiction, to correct JKR's errors and/or offer different realities where more common sense reigns. Keep up the good work and I hope you will be able to update soon.

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  (#) traintroll 2008-11-25

  I have enjoyed this tale of yours. There has been only a few other stories I have read where Remus is a 'bad' guy, and the only one where he is set up as one while at Hogwarts as a student. It also shows just how manipulative Dumdedork was even in the 1970's and after Harry went to Hogwarts. i especially like that Remus does not actually believe that he is a 'bad' guy since he has been trained by DD since at least his first year by DD in subterfuge. I like the various subplots you are using, such as Molly's 'love' potions and Moody's concuring acceptence of them, even though DD is now dead.

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  (#) Uncle_Buck 2009-04-26

  I have been waiting for updates. I first descovered this syory and this website at the same time. Your portrale of Harry personality wist is closer to what I think of Harry in the books. Concidering the effects described in the book of the night bus and the appearence of no.12. there has to be sone powerful magic users and your super Harry is not too much yet. I have a theory of the nightbus travel discription. I think some magic is outside common believed physical world beliefs. Magic users have access to parralell dimensions. for example in modern physics mater and energy can neither be created or destroid just changed states. so whar happens with a toxic potion and the spell evinesco? write me back if you want a trick with the motorcycle and Harry's power. thanks Jerome aka Uncle_Buck

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  (#) Uncle_Buck 2009-09-30

  I've been waiting almost a year.
  You finnished chapter 6 in the conferance with Remus. Perhaps you can continue with Harry grilling Remus about his true feelings about Lilly. He loved her would set H&H to reenergise Remus with the knowledge that Snape and Petigrew were with Moldy and throw the thaught that Albus instigated their murders. Perhaps, that the prophacy might say with Harry's death Moldy might become Mortal. But with the events of the diary, much of Albus's Plans had to be rethaught. Snape abviously had sever influences with the old man and and may have been potiening him. And Severous may truely been providing intel to kill order members.
  Remus may have lost his mate to Severous intel.
  Can a spy be a betrayer if he is not working against his true dark self?

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