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• One Man Army

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-06

  Heh, an army of Harry Potters? Oh, that's going to be a real surprise, even if they're only restricted to the spells Harry knows at the end of Fourth Year, they're still going to be quite a surprise to the on-coming forces and mercs. I suspect there's going to be quite a surprise for a lot of folk when they go into action.
  
  Of course, the real fun will come at such time as Harry returns out of the RoR with whatever forces can come with him out of the Room. Another question is the time differential between where Harry is now and outside the roon. If the room allows a lot of time to pass inside for comparatively little outside, there's going to be some very surprised folk when Harry exits the room.
  
  

  Author's response

  Yea, I'll allow earth to be located in space as well. Just add some more fire-power to Harry's army. Don't worry about his skill level, I placed him on Kamino for a reason. You'll find that out soon enough lol.

• One Man Army

  (#) cj_cold 2008-04-07

  Interesting concept.
  
  The use of the RoR is a little Dues Ex Machina for my taste, but not a bad idea.
  
  The idea of a clone army of Harry Potter's is interesting. Sound like something out of a Snape nightmare though. Maybe an Omake with Snape having a Force premonition. "Their is a disturbance in the force, it was as if millions of Gryffindors were born"
  
  Do wonder how the clones will learn to focus their magic without wands. Unless the Kamino's can use the feather from his wand to clones lots of Phoenixes to give more feathers.
  
  Would be nice if Harry and his clones could figure out apparition for tactical mobility.
  
  Wonder if Harry and the clones army will still be around in a few years when Naboo kicks off. That might be really interesting.
  
  Maybe Padme as a pairing?
  
  Voldemort and his DE's don't stand a chance.

  Author's response

  I think I put it on my AN, this story is set 10 years before the Invasion of Naboo. This will allow Harry to create some chaos within the galaxy. This also allows me to tap into dead characters in Star Wars that died by time of Episode 1. Harry won't be able to use much magic seeing he'll probably be shot before he can finish his spells. Remember, he's 14 years old. That means his knowledge of spells have been greatly reduced to a few handful. He'll gain new abilities along with his troops. Also the troopers will not get wands, can you imagine fawkes seeing an army of Harry going after his feathers? Hey! That would make a nice Omake! Harry will get his new abilities soon along with some good battle experience.

• One Man Army

  (#) javacap 2008-04-07

  Please have it harrypadme
  

  Author's response

  I hadn't decided on the pairing yet. I'm not very good in romance. I'll probably implied pairings. Well, at least until I can learn a little more how to write romance fics without turning it into a fluffy fic. You'll see the first possible female that can be paired with Harry in the next chap. It might slightly suprise you :)

• One Man Army

  (#) JVTazz 2008-04-07

  This is definately an interesting story, I'm curious to see where else you go with it. Maybe Kamino's could or would bring a jedi knight to assist in training Harry while the clones are being grown.

  Author's response

  Well, I won't put Harry within the Jedi Order. It'll make the story too cliche and uninteresting. But don't worry, he'll meet some jedis in his journey. After all, he'll need messenger to spread his name across the galaxy....

• One Man Army

  (#) Vanir 2008-04-07

  blink
  
  Now, there's a concept i never would have thought of unless really, really drunk. To my unmitigated shock, it works, too. On the wand issue, the focusing function of the wand should be able to analyse and syntesize by a superior technology, even though the magic itself can't be. A thought here, though. If my geekish recollection of the construction of a light sabre still works, doesn't it use a crystal as a focusing agent, a crystal that has to be attuned to the user and intuitively chosen by the user? High-tech wands, anyone? Imagine the coolness of batting an AK away with a lightsabre. Damn! I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.
  
  Vanir

• One Man Army

  (#) Vanir 2008-04-07

  Oh gods. I just mentally replaced Dumbles with Yoda.
  "Lemondrop, you care for, hmm?"
  
  PLEASE continue this.
  Vanir again

• One Man Army

  (#) Isebas 2008-04-07

  This looks pretty good so far. I like HP/SW crossovers but sadly there's not many out there. I think it's pretty cool that he landed on Kamino and I like him getting his own clone army. It would be cool if Harry got to explore more of the Star Wars Universe.
  
  Later,
  Isebas

  Author's response

  Harry won't come back to his own world for quite some time. Most of his time in Star Wars galaxy will be engaged in wars.

• One Man Army

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-04-20

  Sorry that I forgot to review this first part here, and really interesting to see how it works, but it does, really well. Going to be fun how the Army of Harry's does against these forces, as well as what this will mean when order 66? comes into play, or will it this time around?

  Author's response

  I think the Order 66 for Harry will probably target Wizards and Witches rather than Jedis. Remember, the Wizarding World will probably come back to bite him in the ass after he take out Voldemort for them. If that happens the Kaminoans' fail-safe wit hactivate and bye bye wizards.

• One Man Army

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2010-04-22

  Very good start.
  
  gunny

• One Man Army

  (#) Richardc269 2011-02-24

  Your story needs a bit of work. I just couldn't get into your story. The details are kinda flat, and the characterization falls flat, too. An army of Harry Potter's? No thanks.

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