(#) Darksnider05 2008-04-08Weird clone pairings.... anyway looking forward to seeing if they'll have the kreepy potter luck in battle.
Author's responseWell, I haven't decided on the pairing yet. I just merely implied that it might be a pairing. You'll see some of that luck popping out soon, but all of them are genetically enchanced. So they won't need it much.
- An army of female Harry's? That could get rather interesting, and disturbing (heh, could make for some erotic fantasies, too). Now, imagine a research team of cloned Hermione's.
Meanwhile, the background to the action slowly develops as forces gather.
Oh, one small typo, "...I was afraid that you would not regain unconsciousness.” should be "...I was afraid that you would not regain consciousness.”
Author's responseNot exactly an army, just merely a legion. thanks for the correction, I'll fix it up soon. I'm not putting Herminone with clones. A little too much for me at the moment.
- Nice, nice. Perhaps all the clones should be female? On second thought, let's not. Imagine a PMS-ing army. shudder
Well, that could of course be ignored. "Harry and the Harriers"?
A good way to differentiate beteen the commander and the troops, and good for avoiding the otherwise inevitable mix'n'switch-situations.
Oh, and don't overdo the training scenes. They always makes "eye of the tiger" come to mind, and i hate that song.
Author's responseI'll only have one legion of Female Harry to 'serve' him Ku Ku Ku. The rest will consist of male clones troopers. As for your idea about the advanced wands, I will consider it. I've never thought of it that way before.
- Interesting chapter.
So Harry's first clones are going to be female. If they work out I would suggest that he have them make more. Maybe a 2male/1female ratio. Women are better for somethings afterall.
I wonder what they will look like. For that matter what age will they be grown them to.
Nice idea to have Harry trained by bounty hunters. Too bad they don't have any Jedi holocrons laying around to train his force abilities.
I assume they are going to take a flash imprint of his mind after his training to give the clones skills?
More soon please.
Author's responseIf I tell you now it will ruin the suprise! lol Ch. is a pain to write at the moment. Work and other things are bogging me down! That and I'm having trouble describing Harry's female clones.
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