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Landing on his feet
(#) Cateagle 2008-04-12
Fort Worth, Dallas? If the state is named Dallas, he's most definitely slipt 'tween timelines and it should be interesting to see what else has changed. It's getting rather interesting, to say the least, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.Author's response
Thanks for the review
Actually you caught a little fuck up, though this time line will definately be different from the other.
I'm hoping to most of all take new looks on old characters. Next chapter for example is going to have a (very) different spin on two canon characters.Landing on his feet
(#) toranosuke 2008-04-13
Sorry to say this but I noticed a ton of typos and spelling errors ('witch' instead of 'which' and 'where' instead of 'were' being the most common) so you really need to proofread as some of them do interfere with enjoying the story.
Apart from that, I'm quite excited to see what the heck is happening in jolly old England. I must admit I'm curious about what you're doing with the characters and what's happening to this world's Harry.
CheersLanding on his feet
(#) Cateagle 2008-04-13
Well, that particular "oopsie" is something that'd immediately catch this Texan's eye since I currently live in Fort Worth. The airport itself is the DFW Regional Airport.
Following up on toranosuke's comments, bits that also caught my eye, might I suggest a good beta or proofreader? I know from experience that they'll find things that sail right past you.
Still, it looks like it's going to be quite a fun story and I'll be looking forward to seeing where you take it.Author's response
Thank you and Toranosuke for the grammar help, I'll try to keep a more watchful eye on it next time (and I went back and fixed a few of the 'which-witch' mistakes).
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