(#) Wonderbee31 2008-05-09So, with how Harry is manipulating water in Dudley's bladder, will he be an elemental? If he is, I can't wait to see the havoc he may cause with that power. Nice part with Minerva, and really loved Harry letting her know that while he's interested, he's not going to just fall all over himself and bow down and worship the wizarding world, and bet when he finds out Dumbledore left him at the Dursley's, and good will may just evaporate like mercury. Snape, well, if he's the same as canon, I cannot see this Harry putting up with his abuse, and with that said, I can't wait to see what house he ends up in.
- Oh so you're using the "Why don't you write something and see how that turns out." standard reply.
Let me assure you that you don't have to be a write to review stories.
I like independed!smart!super!Harry but there's a limit in everything, if you go overboard you'll end up in plothole hell and you're heading straight for it.
I'm sorry I'm not one of these other people that will tell you how great your story is and that you should super Harry a bit more up just for good mesure.
Author's responseSo please, tell me how I'm overpowering him. And what, pray tell, is this scientific magic crap that you were going on about in your first post.
- This is a new and interesting way of setting up a story. I think that the new more academically minded and skilled harry wil have a certain flair that the cannon Harry did not. I also feel that he will relate more to Hermione then ever. Keep up the great work.
- Excellent...c'est trés bon. While he seems slightly older than one would expect, that's okay.
His last sentence, as Alorkin said, is fantabulous. This is just setting itself up for greatness.
Also, I presume he will be going to Hogwarts...but hopefully he will retain some connection to the Muggle world/Muggle education.
(#) draregerreip 2008-05-13mmm ... like it ? ... no ... love it :)
You write really well. Your description of Harry's magic self learning was masterful. Definitely the best among the myriad of fanfics I have read.
Hope your plot is as well developed. It's a bit early to give an opinion on it. Harry is way too mature for a normal kid his age but... oh well Mozart wrote his first opera at 11 so ...
I really enjoyed those first chapters, thanks for writing them for us.
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