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Elementary Calculations
(#) Wolfric 2008-05-16
Great chapter. I continue to enjoy your fine story. I anticipate that things will not be smooth sailing between Harry and Albus. I'm surprized Harry didn't rip Minerva a new one when she told him about being part of having left him with the Dursleys. I would anticipate Harry would wait and watch, then strike when he could be the most effective. Sounds slytherin to me. Of course he hasn't met snape or Malfoy yet. Thanks for writing. W.Elementary Calculations
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-05-17
If I were Harry I woud bring charges up on Dumbledore.
IHarry needs to goback to his old school and tell the Headmaster ther that he has forged docmunts.
Hit Dumbledore where it hurts.
Harry needs to hold a press confrence and expose all that Dumbledore has done to Harry.
I would charge Dumbledore 1 "Google" Galun per second cash to goto Hogwarts.
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(#) dc1 2008-05-17
I have certainly enjoyed reading your story. An intelligent main character is always good. I especially liked the logical progression that Harry has made as well as working with what he had available to him. Based on your last chapter I would love to see Harry get dumbles booted out of Hogwarts and then leave for another school, be in Durmstrang or Xaviers. Looking forward to your next chapter.
cheers
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(#) Wauzi 2008-05-17
I just want to slam Dumbledore into a wall till he loses the twinkle in his eyes. He is just so frustating.
I think Harry should go to Gringotts, receive his Lordship and declare Dumbledore "persona non grata" to the Potter-line to block any influences he still has about Harry. Additionally I like the idea from Cocoa-girl. So should he openly defy Dumbledore and attend his old school per correspondence. Keep up the good work!
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(#) jabarber69 2008-05-17
I can tell you this much, if this story is any indication, then dumbydork, hogwarts and the wiz world had better bend over and kiss their sorry arses good bye cause if I were harry I would not show up for one, and when or if they dragged me off I would do everything in my power to disrupt their everyday lives to the point of killing them if I have too! I would also go to petunia and take her to headmaster at xavier and have her tell him that his guardain her didnt sign nor will she ever sign for him to go to hogwarts!
P.S. with what dumbydork just did, why is fawkes still there!Elementary Calculations
(#) Pointer 2008-05-17
If Harry didn't care about his classwork, he would be nearly uncontrollable. As it is, any method that doesn't affect his grades will have limited effectiveness.
Hand a kid the next best thing to the keys to the city.
I would be taking careful notes as to the best way to hurt Dumbles in the future. Very careful. Useful about the time I left his authority.
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(#) thekev 2008-05-17
I love it. Harry with spine, keep it up. hell i hope he treats Dumbles like something you get on your shoes that makes you toss them.Elementary Calculations
(#) DrT 2008-05-17
If Harry had agreed to go, he would have been a Ravenclaw for sure. Now, though, he should be a Slytherin -- if so, Draco and Snape might distract him from Dumbledore for a short timeElementary Calculations
(#) Logan 2008-05-17
Absolutely brilliant. I wonder, will Harry try to make DD's life as... interesting as possible, or will just pretend to be indifferent while plotting?
Amazing chapter.
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(#) The_Warden 2008-05-17
Seems quite interesting, I hope this story doesn't suffer the same fate as so many other alternative Harry goes to Hogwarts stories and is discontinued early on.
Oh, and Ravenclaw or Slytherin?
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