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Elementary Calculations
(#) red_jacobson 2008-05-17
I have to echo several of the other reviewers and say that I can't wait to see what Harry does to Dumbledore and the power structure of the school. I hope you will allow him to at least have some friends, especially the Bushy-Haired Bookworm. In fact, I'd be very surprised if Hermione wasn't aware of the Xavier Academy, and that would probably impress her even more than the "Boy Who Lived" garbage.
Of course, I seriously doubt that Ron, or any of the Weasleys will end up friends with Harry, considering how close they are to Dumbles. Although the Twins might get close to him, simply because they're the Twins GRIN
Looking forward to more
redElementary Calculations
(#) vl100butch 2008-05-17
I don't think old Dumbles knows what's going to hit him....Elementary Calculations
(#) Eewec 2008-05-17
Hmmm, evil chuckle
Oh Dumbledore, what an idiot you are.
I see he said he'd be on the train, not that he'd attend the school... wonder just how much complete and total devastation he'll cause en route.
/me can picture it now:
Hogwarts Express limps into Hogsmede station, the train cars only just still attached. The students all packed into the forward most train car and Harry at the other end of the train in an untouched compartment.
Lets face it, his wandless magic is pretty darn good considering what he was capable of in earlier chapters.
Looking forward to the next chapter.Elementary Calculations
(#) akuma-san 2008-05-17
Oh the sorting is going to be painful. Ron will make a ass of himself and further Harry's hatred of the Wizerding world. Malfoy to.Elementary Calculations
(#) mumihp 2008-05-17
Well looks like Dumbledre has screwed the wizardy world and any attempts to have harry in thier society. I hope Harry gives it to that fucker and makes him pay. I do hope Harry fucks up peoples life in Hogwarts, feel really sorry for him, I mean he still could have completed his education in the muggle world and gain something, then go to the wizardy world, get himself educated so he have a chance at life, now th fucked screwed things up for him. Is napes a bastard to him, then let harry stand up for himself, just becuase Harry said he attend, doesn't mean he go clasess or dentention.Elementary Calculations
(#) Clell65619 2008-05-17
- Wow. I hope Dumbles knows he just created a monster. He's made a kid attend his school with the understanding that his not wanting to attend didn't matter in the least. Which gives Harry carte blanch to do what ever the hell he wants with no fear of expulsion... Interesting.Elementary Calculations
(#) Alorkin 2008-05-17
I have the distinct feeling that Dumbles is going to experience first hand what a poor choice he made in coercing Harry. Nothing like a hugely powerful and extremely pissed off wizard. I wonder if Harry is going to bring his manipulations to light, or simply use the passive resistance. Either way, I eagerly await the next chapter. AlorkinElementary Calculations
(#) Elfwyn 2008-05-17
Wonderful story. Hope Harry plays hell in the school. One thing though, there are so many redoes of JKR's books with the stone, basalisk, etc. out there already that it would be really really refreshing if you did something totally radically different to go with the start of your story. One other thought, why not have Harry threaten to transfer to another magic school after a bit of research?Elementary Calculations
(#) Ender_Wiggin 2008-05-17
I was pleasantly surprised when I read this story. Definitely wasn't what I thought it would be, very well done.
I love what you've done with your Harry. You've done an excellent job in developing his character. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really can't see Harry acting with any sort of kindness to anyone in the wizarding world at this point, except for the muggleborns. Can we say "Viva la Revolution"!!!
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