Hello. Over the last few months ive been typing up chapters for your enjoyment. i have over 100 views, and i thank you for that. but can one of you please review? just one. one piece of encouragement or critisism. either way. type what you think, and ill make a new chapter. Simple, ain't it? So review with something good or something bad, and ill create a new chapter.
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