Categories > Books > Harry Potter > Elementary Calculations
(#) Ishikawa 2008-05-24I really love your Harry, looking forward to see what he has planed for Dumbledore later on. And of course what he makes of Snape. It will be interesting.
(#) Clell65619 2008-05-24- Dumbles has done it this time, forcing a powerful, angry young man into his silly little school...
(#) rijlkent 2008-05-24I'm enjoying this. From the title of the chappie, I was expecting the papers in Harry's hand to burst into flame. It was much colder Harry instead.
I don't have a lot of comment on the content... just setting things up for Hogwarts. A good setup with Ron and Hermione... the twins could go either way, but it looks like Harry will appreciate them. (I mean, c'mon, the twins!)
Looking forward to what's next-
(#) banner 2008-05-24Yes!
Make Dumbledore suffer. Does MacGonagall know how Harry was forced to change schools?
(#) MonCappy 2008-05-24It looks like things are not turning out the way Dumblefuck expected. He has already made an enemy of Harry. Harry is no pawn in this story and he has already diverged from whatever path the old goatfucker had planned for for him.
I do feel bad for Hermione. Without Harry around she will have a very tough time of it in Gryffindor than she would have had she been placed in Ravenclaw. She will end up regretting ending up in Ravenclaw (there is also no way that manipulative old bastard was anywhere other than Slytherin).
I can't wait to see Harry destroy everything Dumbles has been working toward. I also expect Harry to deliver a sticky end to Snape.
(#) Dragon451 2008-05-24I'm sorry I can't agree with the others on this one. Until this chapter Harry was struggling and winning against a situation and homelife that was against him. In this chapter Harry stepped over a line and became an obnoxious brat. He is taking out his frustration on his fellow students content in his superiority over them. He has become good company for the likes of Draco Malfoy and Tom Riddle.
(#) DrT 2008-05-24I can see where this version of Harry would want nothing to do with Ron, and I agree with others -- Hermione will have an even more horrible time in Gryffindor than she started off having.
Snape v Harry should be epic, esp. since this Harry knows Dumbledore would do anything to keep him at Hogwarts
(#) SamStone 2008-05-24Nice very nice. I do see this Hermione as being completely abandoned and perhaps being a step away from leaving the magical world entirely. I do hope to see a conversation between the two post authority disillusionment and her being offended that someone that worked to excel academically was forced into a quaint schooling. Given things a complete loss of a sense of superiority ever developing for her seems certain though Harry should avoid becoming as arrogant as the man that manipulated him.
(#) yared94 2008-05-24Your plot is... very entertaining (=worth reading).
I like your writing style, it has its goods and bads, it's very
straight forward but you do not describe Harry's surroundings, though that may have something to do with the fact that everyone knows how Hogwarts looks like.
(#) jabarber69 2008-05-24Hey I imagine the way that Harry feels about being forced to attend hogwarts, then that talk with V, should be quite interestiung, if nothing else harry could at least say, you dont bother me and I want bother you!
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