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Elementary Calculations
(#) swdrone 2008-06-01
Very good. I enjoyed the interaction between Harry and Minne. I doubt he will trust her but I suspect he will at least listen to her if she has an interactions with him. Nice trick by DD to get to Hogwarts but man is he going to pay for it.Elementary Calculations
(#) Vanir 2008-06-02
This is a great Harry, one of the most entertaining I've read. I almost pity Dumbles in this one...
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(#) TheUnicorn 2008-06-03
Review of chapter 7:
very nice. If I was in Harry's place I'd have tried some other tactics to evade the Headmasters manipulations before showing up in Hogwarts or at least make it more uncomfortable for him when I do show up. However Harr's not me and your characterization is consistent.
I liked the description of events on the train, especially the Hermionie and Harry's thoughts about her (I really liked your explanation for how and she ended up in Gryfindor). so far you're doing a very good job of not changing things which have no reason to change, nor forcing events into the template of the books (the two most common mistakes with AU stories).
One nitpick - why didn't Hermionie ask about Harry's book?
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(#) rdgale2000 2008-06-16
Great chapter! Loved the part with Draco and Ron! Who knew! Dinner AND a show!
Great house placement!
Now, bring on Snape!
rdgale
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