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Slayer Story
(#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-16
hmmm...i like this!
she seems so detatched, but in a good way... (that didnt make sense, but i hope you understand what im trying to say!lol)
very nice!Slayer Story
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-06-20
Well, I came across this fic, because you mention it in a thread in the forum, and thought I'd drop by, read, and give my feedback. Because, I don't really roam near the Horror section, much. I'm more of a fan fiction gal, myself. But, I'm up for any Original fiction as well. :]
But, when I finished this, I was not disappointed. :]
It was really good. A little short, but hey, a little goes a long way, right? Right.
I do enjoy the plot you have here. I like where this is going. And I also like Theta. She has spunk and she seems realistic. :]
Alrighty then, I'm off to read the next chappy!
Slayer Story
(#) No_Leaf_Frantic 2008-11-10
"Angry turtle" Priceless. I'm likeing Theta already! goes off to read the rest of the storySlayer Story
(#) okokoiz2kool 2009-01-05
Well, you're a good writer, but you have some awkward phrasing every no and then like "angry turtle". It's cute and odd, but awkward nonetheless because it doesn't bring any images to mind.
I like the concept of a child being the protagonist
There were several opportunities for elaboration and more... depth into the characters, but it was overall well written
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