- That wasn't too long..in fact, I didn't want to stop reading it...it was too...wow. Just awesomely, magnificently amazing =]
Author's responseThanks a lot! It was actually long but I couldn't stop writing it, like I said. The words and ideas possessed me, poked me with a stick to make me write and write quick...
(#) lilrainforest 2008-06-09okay... lemme start...
first off... that was a freaking amazingly long one shot that i really really really loved.
second... you're writing style is incredible and it made it seem so... real.
also... like the plot was... [insert awesome adjective here]. i loved it and i found it so new and just like... something i never would have thought of.. ever.
i loved it !
Author's responseThankiesss =)
I've wanted to write a Frank/Gerard forever, you know? And then, I dunno how, but this plot came to me from out of the blue. I was supposed to be studying for my finals and my head just wiped itself out and then BAM: it was filled with this! So I'm really really glad you like it :)
(#) crystalcrash 2008-06-10Wow. I love it!! I demand you spend the rest of your free time writing Frerard stories from now on. Screw that - i demand you drop out of college and dedicate yourself completely to writing frerards. It was so incredibly good!
The story is amazing! In the beginning i thought it was Gerard buying the sleeping pills since the poor guy is always the one getting drunk and drugging himself in stories hehe.
Now, since are a lot of things/sentences i loved in this story, i'm going to make a list! haha Yes, i'm bored even though i should be studying. (exams are coming up for me now). So. Here it is. For your personal enjoyment^^
-when frank talks about the ways he could kill himself and decides pills are best
-the fact he'll miss Green Day (i would too!)
-how he would put music on while taking the pills so it would be the last thing he hears (i would do that too, if i decided to take pills and commit suicide, which i wouldn't)
-the pimp asking if he wanted a girl, and frankie asking for a guy. Yesss! "he'd better be beautiful". Can't get any more beautiful than our two boys ;)
-Gerard saying he never kisses anyone. That reminded me of pretty woman hahaha Its so cute ^^
Its so dark and depressing, and the end is such a huge contrast with Frankie being his normal hyper self... i just loved it. So now i'll favorite this. And rate it original. Because it is.
I'll end this huge-ass review... lately everything i do is huge-ass. Lol.
PS. FANTASTIC job. Ok i'm done now ;)
Author's responseWooow, thankieeessss =) You know what, if I could write like this all the time, I would consider being a writer. It was like nothing I've ever experienced, I felt the need to write. I had to write. The scenario just wouldn't leave my mind and I started writing this because I couldn't study - the thoughts just wouldn't leave me alone. It was kinda strange...
The thing about Green Day is actually true for me, too. I think if I ever have suicidal thoughts, the urge to wait for a new album or a concert or a book or a film could make me hold on. But I'd never consider hurting myself in the first place, I usually get angry at other people instead of me ;P
Gerard not kissing anyone is very important. It's... intimate. You see that when at first he lies to Frank about the reason he doesn't kiss customers. And yeah, I see how that might remind you of Pretty Woman. That was a really nice movie...
Thanks again. I'm soo glad you like this!
P.S. I added you ;)
(#) crystalcrash 2008-06-10I forgot one thing (unbelievable, considering the size of my first review).
The lyrics. I'm not a big fan of AFI but that song is one of the few i like.
The JEW lyrics fit so perfectly, just like the AFI ones. Great job picking them ;)
Author's responseYeah, I'm kinda neutral about AFI but this song captures me. The way it's so plain and simple with his voice so soothing... and the lyrics. And of course Work is one of my favorite JEW songs and I knew I was gonna write something about it someday ;) Thanks!
(#) sleepyfaerie 2008-06-12wow
that was... incredible
it was kind of long for a one-shot, but if it had been any shortet it would have felt too rush
so many plots are way too overused, but yours was amazing
original and beautiful
you write so well, loved the style!
please write some more!
Author's responseHeee, thank you!
I know it was a bit long but I felt like you, too. I didn't wanna rush anything...
Thanks again, I'll try to write more but I don't know if the plot will come to me again like this one did. I guess I need to be inspired :)
- I loved it so much. it was amazing and brilliant and awesome. It was so good. no great. It was written so well. It was genious. I seriously loved it. it was the best thing I have ever read in my entire life. better then an actual book.
Id rate but i dont have anymore rating points but if I could Id rate it as either original or moving
Author's responseHaha thankiess xD I loved the "better than an actual book" part, I am so flattered, right now!!
I'm glad you like this so much. So, if I pout, will you rate sometime later? It's about to turn green and I'm all hyper aboout it!!! :P
(#) xleftxbehindx 2008-06-17That was probably the most amazing story that i have ever read. I was literally weeping when I was reading. It was so touching. I could feel everything that they felt, they're pain and sadness, and the love.
That was so original too. I've never read anything like it. You have to right more. i am adding you to my favorite authors and i'm going to check everyday to see if you have anything new. you are amazing!
Author's responseWow, thank you! I'm glad this touched you because it touched me, too, while I was writing it so now I'm a bit proud that I could project the emotions to you like that.
And thanks for adding me to your favorite authors =) I'll certainly try to come up with something new...
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