(#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-06-10Very interesting, and tragic if Harry's death is both real and permanent. I won't believe it 'till the story's over, though.
Looking forward to more, and crossing my fingers for Ron and Malfoy to kill each other in a mutual fit of stupidity.
Author's responseGood judgment call. As for Ron and Draco, you may be surprised.
- Great to read more chapters!! seems like Voldemort have the uperhand, I hope next chapters will show some advance in the forces of light.
By the way I really hope Harry is not dead and that all that was only to "awaken" is internal wolf.
I really hope you can continue soon, you really put us in a cliffhanger.
Author's responseYou'll know what happened to Harry on the next chapter. As for the forces of the light, you just have to read the next chapter.
(#) BlackPhoenix5 2008-06-10This chapter was really good. THe 'death' of Harry is an interesting twist, but, from what i can gather, his 'death' is just apart of a grander scheme. This story is intriguing at best.
I hope you update soon.
Author's responseYou can guess what that scheme is after I post the next chapter, which is the last one.
(#) alec_potter 2008-06-11You are evil....update soon.
But the story has been going great so far. It's just that your habbit of leaving us out with a cliffy and that too for long periods of time is seriously annoying.
Please update soon.
Author's responseThanks for being patient. I'll try to update my story sooner.
- HEY! you can't kill harry. he didn't even get a chance to kiss his girlfriend properly. but I really hope that harrys "death" is temporary and that he gets a chance to hurt malfoy and ron later.
Author's responseHarry's death is on this new update. As for kissing a girl, Ron and Malfoy, that's another story.
A rather unsatisfying story. The biggest problem is that the author appears not to be a native speaker. The clearest evidence is the use of more than one verb tense in the same clause of a sentence. The spelling is reasonable but the author seems to use longer words rather than shorter, perhaps because it appears more "literary?" This author needs help.
The plot line is interesting but the lack of continuity and the non-standard English make it hard to read. I'd like to find out if there is more to be written.
Author's responseI posted the last chapter for this HP fanfiction.
- the first thing i have to say is it's been a long time since the last update that i read back in 07 ...so good to have you back....my first reaction after reading about harry's death would have been WTF???? but after reading much about magic there is always more than what meets the eye...great chapter with lots of action and its good to read original plots and theories....hope u update soon....keep writing :)
Author's responseThanks. Hope you'll read the story to the end.
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