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• Quicksand

  (#) dtng101 2008-06-13

  Wow this story got my attention.
  -It's one of a kind.
  -I liked the way you described them in the beggning.
  -It also had a really great start!!
  -KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK=D!!!!
  -ALSO PLZ UPDATE ASAP.=D
  

• Quicksand

  (#) alice93 2008-06-14

  I'm really loving this story at the moment. It's sort of quite mysterious but at the same time descriptive.
  
  I also like where the story line is going. I think you can go very wrong with a middle/high school fanfiction but yours seems like it's going to be really good.
  
  The characters seem interesting and realistic and the story isn' too dramatic at the beginning.
  
  The only thing I would suggest is that you maybe describe things a little bit more.
  
  Anyway, great looking story. I can't wait for the next chapter.
  
  Update soon.
  
  Alice.

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