(#) ArgyleSockMonkey 2012-03-12I think the brain cells should stay just with BMD. I love them to pieces, but mychemicalbitchbot is right. If you use them too often, they will lose their charm. I'm sure you can think of something equally original for the new story! Can't wait to read:)
(#) methanemandie 2012-03-14Just so you know you are one of my fav writers and i mean all of this in the nicest way possible and i just wana give you some helpful criticism :X
i dont think you should keep the brain cells. It started cute but it slowly started to dominate the story so after a while it seemed that half the update was just going on in gerards head. Same with the muttering. It was adorable at first but after a while i really wished gerard could form a sentence.
Its still a great story and you are still an AMAZING writer. I hope you feel better hun :)
(#) aweirdtree 2012-03-17ooooh, the brian cells are my favourites! :D so keep them, please xd
and don't you dare to say you've been a shitty author; i think it's fucking wonderful you're even writing anything. i don't think i would be if i was in a situation like yours (: so just take your time and rock on! :D
- mmk so I love the way you write and it's freaking hilarious but the more BMD went on the more it seemed like the brain cells took over. I didn't like how gee became pretty much unable the function BUT I loveloveloveloved frank the whole story he was soooo awesome and I really liked how he was the chill cool one while gee was the awkward one. so ya do something different and kill the brain cells so you can change it up and keep being awesome:)
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