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• You’re My Phobia

  (#) MyFamousLastWords 2008-08-25

  Thats Was Awesome!
  
  It Was Sad Though,I Was Crying.Lol.
  
  It Was Good,Im Glad You Ended It Like That.It Makes Sense.If Anyone Else Wrote It - It Would End Like Fucking Happily Ever After.
  
  It Was A Really Good Story,But All Things Have To Come To A End.
  
  I Hope You Do Keep Up The Good Writing In Stories To Come.Lol.
  
  ML,Fin Ox.

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) lostmymindxx45 2008-08-25

  I'm sorry..But I fucking thought it was disappointing? or stupid? something like that. I mean hey,its your story and you write it however you want, but I guess I am just a happy ending person? But I guess it made some sense, but I didn't like it. I'm sorry. But that doesnt mean you're not a bad ass writer because it was still awesome in that sad way. I think u r amazing at writing and it was still AWESOME even though it was sad in a way.
  
  Sorry if like I didn't really like THE ENDing, I like everything else, but not the end. Sorry but I'm speaking my mind! lol
  
  Anyway. I still thought it was worth reading and I am glad I waited like 1 month for every chapter!!
  
  lol
  
  I hope you maybe write other storys in the future!!
  
  THanks for a some what awesome story!
  
  xo
  C-line
  
  

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) lilrainforest 2008-08-25

  I really do think that was an amazing ending, despite Gerard having to die. I understand the whole concept of Frank wanting himself to be the only one to hurt Gerard and no one else. It all makes sense now. Beautiful.
  
  Even though things came to an end, I enjoyed reading this whole thing from start to finish. You truly do have a talent when it comes to writing. Please, keep on doing it. I'll be looking for your stories in the near future.
  
  Well, thats it.
  
  xo,
  Ray

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-08-25

  oh wow! that was the most amazing plot ever.........im serious. i totally got how frank's killing Gerard was actually coz he loved him. and even though it was really sad, i loved how everything just flowed together and just was so beautiful!!!!
  great job!
  
  
  gini

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) EvolHexx 2008-08-25

  Thanks guys. :)
  
  lostmymindxx45, I am slightly disappointed that you disliked the ending but I understand. What would be a successful writer without negative responses? Anyways, I’d like to actually thank you. Thank you, for having the fucking guts to say something!
  
  But, as you should have all been aware.. I don’t exactly write happy endings, the line “there is no such thing as happy endings” – (Geared, chapter 1) was a warning to those readers who enjoy sappy “they lived happily ever after.”
  
  However it doesn’t matter, what’s done is done. Without that ending, You’re my Phobia wouldn’t exist (came up with the ending first hehe ^^;)
  
  
  
  Anywho, good bye all!
  xo

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) Jess21 2008-08-26

  I promised myself I wouldn't cry, but when I read that Gerard had never burnt the picture of Frank's father, I burst out crying =(
  
  Fantastic story with an even better ending.

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) mcr_rox_42495 2008-08-26

  That was so sad...I teared up at the end... (which is unusual, cuz I'm usually not a crying person).
  
  To tell the truth, I loved the ending. Even though Frank killed Gerard, I feel sorry for him. I dunno why, but it makes me sad that he found out at the end that Gerard really hadn't burned his picture of him and his father...
  
  A happy ending wouldn't have fit this story, I'm glad that if it had to come to Gerard dying, it was this one. It was a beautiful and sad death, like it was destined for him. I guess he never was meant to be truly happy... :(
  
  Your a great writer, as I say again! I hope you continue with other stories and I wish you the best of luck in the future!
  
  P.S. I'm sorry for my especially long reviews, I can't help it.
  
  P.P.S. Especially my last one before this...I just saw it, and I have to say that it was a ridiculous length... :D
  
  Oh well, bye for now! ^_^
  
  XOX Michelle XOX

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) notxokayx15 2008-08-29

  aww that made me so sad at the end): it wasnt teh best ending ever but i thought it made alot of sense and yeah, a happy ending doesnt really seem to fit this story...but if you think about it it sorta had a happy ending in a way...all the love they had for each other.
  
  the part that I thought was the best and really made me cry was when Gee was falling and Frankie opened the note, "you're my phobia, and I'm your obssession" idk i just found that part so sad but full of loveee. And the part where I found out Gee never burnt the picture, I cried.
  
  I really hope you write more original stories like this, we've got too much cliche on this website(but I'll admit I write some cliche) we need more really creative and original ideas.
  
  Wow, this is a really long review xD well, please write more stories. I love them
  
  xo
  love ya
  Meg(:

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) E-JayLovesGerard 2009-06-08

  Even though im not happy with you leaving it, i loved it!
  
  i wish Gee didnt have to die :(
  
  xox E

• You’re My Phobia

  (#) PatbtrthnPete 2010-08-14

  i liked it up til then. wow. that was screwed up i get it but still. no sleepin tonight... lol and wtf mikey dies too... idk

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