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• Deadlines

  (#) Dondon1827 2008-09-21

  This was a lovely chapter.
  
  I never know what to rate yours because there always funny, moving and original.
  
  I love this story so much and the whole Jill and Bob thing is adorable.
  
  Cant wait for more :D
  
  Dondon xo.

  Author's response

  Wow thank you Dondon and your review was so sweet. I'm glad you liked it and hopefully i'm getting the mixture of emotions right :)

• Deadlines

  (#) moonpig 2008-09-21

  I can't tell you how much i love this story, you have me laughing, almost crying and then waiting in anticipation for what will happen next.
  
  Some of your lines are hysterical and the bit with Frank teasing Jill with the photo - brilliant.
  
  Jill's Dad was so funny.
  
  thank you so much Neve

  Author's response

  Thanks Moonpig for reviewing and for leaving such a fab review. I'm so glad you liked the chapter and i know i take an age to update but i write so much and never want to stop at a cliffhanger. Let me know if i ramble on :)

• Deadlines

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-09-21

  Hi Neve,
  
  I really love this story and was excitred to see an update!!
  
  And what an update it was.
  
  It was sweet when Bob lied down with Jill and just held her.
  
  The story of her mother's death was so moving and real because that's how you feel after losing someone. You're just waiting for them to walk through that door.
  
  The photograph incident was hysterical and Worm being a "traitor" LOL!!
  
  At the end saying good bye was just so sweet.
  
  I really get so excited when I read this story because I know I'm going to read something special.
  
  Thanks for the update and looking forward to more.

  Author's response

  Thank you so much :)
  
  I've experienced someone really close to me dying and it tore me in two, i don't think you ever get over it but you learn to move on and it does get easier. If i even managed to convey Jill's feelings slightly i'll be glad. Kind of cathartic.
  
  I like including Worm in my story but i know nothing about him so if i'm getting him wrong just shout at me.
  
  Wow, i'm so pleased you like my new chapters. I wish i could right faster but it takes me an age.

• Deadlines

  (#) cutegirl12356 2008-09-21

  awwwwwww i cried....laugh....this chapter was really great.....MORE!

  Author's response

  Thank you so much and i'm glad you enjoyed the update.

• Deadlines

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-09-22

  Oh wow! well i did cry! and then i was laughing! and then i had a tear again!! emotional......me??!
  
  brilliant update! loved how you wrote Jill's dad and him joking with Bob. and Frank is just brilliant!
  
  thanks so much!

  Author's response

  I feel bad that i'm happy i made you cry. I mean i'm so pleased that you could really feel the words in this chapter. I want people to really feel for Jill and understand her as a character. Thank you so much.

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